I love how the author describes the surroundings with unique words and lets you get immersed in the story! The chapters are well-written and built up quite nicely, giving you slowly and skilfully the information about how everything works. There are a lot of VRMMORPG novels out there but I believe this one is different in both the descriptions of the world background and the character! The actions scenes are described in a masterful way without confusing you. Worth giving it a shot! :D
although the characters are not introduced in depth this story I think had a good world background.
the pace of this work is amazing too.. .
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I like how you mixed rebirth genre with a story for teenagers. Story seems easy and fun to read love it! I think this story will be a great comedy because I can't imagine a demon being a teenage student and to help other people to ? Cover is preety nice tho!
Just average, went through mtl until the end, still thought stopping a few times. A few annoying moments such as repeating the same situation from point of view of MC and then other characters, just this alone could shorten the novel by 30% for sure and maybe even more. Another repetite moment is when optic brain solves everything, as opponent does something MC analysis through optic brain and just solves it, and its done. Moreover, another annoying thing is author forgetting parts of the story, not often but around 3-5 times, still impacts the experience. The ending was quite abrupt and anticlimactic, I am sure without all that repetite stuff the novel would have lasted much longer with better ending.I quite like the whole concept of assistance from a super brain in form of optic brain or some form of artificial intelligence, the best to date is Warlock of the Magus World where MC is already intelligent and the A.I. chip is just giving wings to the tiger, but in this case the writting is lacking. Still good effort
This is a must read. This is the best to come from trial read in a while. There have been too many simulators, farms, pets, etc lately. This is a fun change of pace, not to be taken too seriously. Plenty of overanalyzing by third parties that come up with a conclusion on their own. This had me audibly laughing multiple times. The rate of progression is a bit fast, but the leveling system hasn’t been too prevalent yet. Give it a read!
this novel have some potentials , please don't drop it . wish u some luck mate ............................................................................
This novel isn't completed yet. I am still slowly releasing new chapters. This novel was published by EMP-publisher and I don't know why they marked it as completed. Thank you for continuing to support this novel.
Almost 70 chapters, still this novel didn't enter top 100 rankings.
I initially thought that this novel will enter top 20 when it reaches 50 chapters.
Story is amazing. Content quality in each chapter is great. Mc is great. Release rate is extraordinary. Still this did not enter top 100.
There is something wrong here.
I can't find this novel when browsing through eastern fantasy rating section in 4.8 rating region.
Generally, on webnovel, I search for original novels by two ways :
1. In New novel section (I found this novel here) for new novels.
2. For slightly old and old novels, I search in genre ratings section. This novel is not in this section.
If this continues, we might lose an excellent Cultivation novel(rare these days).
Author, please don't lose interest, because of this issue. There is something wrong with webnovel(at least in your novel's case).
I do not have the whole idea of the story but the game is so dumb. Who can ever play a game like this . This is really a bad one and I really do not like it. It's kind of exaggerated too
Really poor grammar. I don't really know if it will improve in the future but my head currently hurts after trying to make sense of this damned thing.
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