Overall, it's pretty good and definitely a fun read. The system isn't the most helpful or very complex but I'm still in the early stages of the story. Instead of flooding readers with a bunch of information, the author makes the smart choice to push on with the narrative.
Kite is a likable protagonist. He's sympathetic, since he was thrown into a game-like world out of nowhere one day and in the body of someone who is low level. He works hard to get himself ahead and the story already has some nice lady characters if you enjoy some intimacy between characters.
The only issues I had with the story were the tense changes in the middle of sentences. Most of the time, instead of using can or can't, use could or couldn't. Otherwise, I recommend the story, it's pretty good. With a little bit of editing I'm sure it'll do even better in the future.
Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. It just so happens that it's not a cop of tea that would suit majority's taste.i think the stars covered all that I could think of rating this novel in.
Im glad you're continuing his novel, I wish you luck!!!
What is changing about the novel? Are you gonna take out the supernatural features of this novel? I never really liked the supernatural part of his novel
i love how every each character of the story is going through, there a lot of inspiration n pasion though. its make me crazy n want more chapter been update soon, cant wait. tq author
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Everything is great but the mc is a total simp and thinks with his dick.other than that it’s a great story
This novel is the reason why I downloaded this app and signed up. I think it's just the perfect mix of not too cold but not too stupid and naive mc. I like the world setup, and especially the ghost system of the mc and am so looking forward to the next chapters to see what else we will discover. I'm almost sad that I discovered the novel now and not in a few months so I could enjoy more chapters. Dear author, thank you very much for your work and I am really looking forward to your future texts! Many greetings
Love the amazing novel and waiting for you chapters abd read them straight away. Rip is an amazing author and should keep it up.
Great novel i cannot express with words how much i liked it i simply can't it's just that great there's no way around it so i'm giving a review to show my support hope it continues for a long time
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