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this novel is not for everyone...
first author unnecessary comments, annoying..
mc character is not likable, he thinks he is the problem of everything too much, which many readers don't like it...
and other things which I am not going to write...
i know this type of novel doesn't have anything special all they gonna do is add Nationalism or make some cliche things with Chinese medicine but for god's sake be a unique one i will change my rating if it's bad
the story is annoying. so if he cultivates he loses strength etc but if he lazes or smokes he gets stronger and the dumbest so far is if he eats he gets hungrier..... so don't eat and you stay full? makes no sense. at the start he has a teacher that rides him kicks him out if class but then makes him come back and forces him to move in with him. story is a waste.
I’m loving the story It is one thing to own a library; it is quite another to use it wisely. I have often been astonished how little care people devote to the selection of what they read. Books, we know, are almost innumerable: our hours of reading are alas! very few. And yet many people read almost by hazard. They will take any book they chance to find in a room at a friend's house; they will buy a novel at a railway stall if it has an attractive title, indeed. I believe in some cases even the binding affects that choice. The selection is, no doubt, far from easy. I have often wished someone would recommend a list of hundred good books. If we had such lists drawn up by a few good guides, they would be most useful. I have indeed sometimes heard it said that in reading everyone must choose for himself, but this reminds me of the recommendation not to go into the water till you can swim.
I would rate this novel a little above average. if it was not for the amazing world building and update stability, I would have rated it average.
the author is copying this novel from [unlimited games: ten times rewards] by (under lolicon i).. please write your own novel rather than copying it.
Interesting premise here. The cat being the main character was a bit unexpected. The chapters were very confusing. Who is who? Character introduction was not proper, and was very confusing in the first chapter. But, the system idea is fine, and different from what i saw before.
Has this romance, harem or any love interest? Cuz so far (Chapter 34) I have seen many hints to a future harem, but there are no tags containing it.
fantastic I love this book this has been by far the best read I would recommend this book author could you please open more chapters for us you have my full support enjoy your gift?
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great book plenty of plot twists I love this book and cannot wait to see where it goes mark is a great character and unlike other books he doesn't just all of a sudden immediately have godlike powers out of nowhere and more detailed about food gathering and gathering ammo which makes it more realistic
