Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
There has been no update for months now, and no explanation either. After sticking with the story for more than 1100 chapters, I want an ending. The translator should have finished his job. If not, I will try to contact the admin because I want to know what the fak is going on.
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun pleas be gentle ".
Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" .
*squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
Awesome story... I love everything about it...
Well written, the background is amazing and can be understood even if you're not Chinese.
Of course, the profound stuff will just sound like nonsense to us, Americans, but it's bearable nonetheless.
The only two faults with this novel are the fact that it has too many Chinese references that non-Chinese people will never understand.
For lack of a better way of describing it, this is the type of novel where a river is never just a river, it is a dragon circling the heavens in a ying-yang sign of blah blah blah... Doesn't make sense to me...
The next issue is the fact that 50 chapters in and only about four days have passed throughout the story... the story is so slow... and when I mean slow, I don't mean slow in progress...
I mean slow because the author spends half the chapter talking about all this Chinese stuff that we will never understand anyway.
This novel is amazing, there is no doubt about that, but this isn't written for everyone... just a very targeted audience of Chinese readers in my opinion.
That's right! I'm shamelessly rating my own novel.
Summary: a man got transmigrated into a merman. Gained abilities from the system. He tries to create his own kind and survive in the apocalyptic. The world background is basically an apocalyptic world where everything can happen. Ghosts, zombies, aliens, vampires, martial art, you name it. The story is still at the starting line but more adventure and lovey-dovey events are in the way. ........ Stay tuned.
I’ll give it 5 stars. The story is good the slice of life is wholesome- you kinda got out of hand when you start writing about the thug life but more or less great stuff. I have a headache sometimes though since the pov change out so much sometimes
Sir Silent Killer.Please Add the Tags, would make it possible for the novel to be found through advanced search and would allow us to use more fast passes.
I quite like this book, it's a fun and relaxing read, if you're bored and don't want to read something to complex, you can give this a read. The techniques and cultivation are kept simple and easy to understand, and the potential of the story isn't quickly used unlike in most of this novels were we don't get any character development and growth form the character, cuz the character is already fully grown. Give this novel a try
interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. im so excited with this book. this book is literally good and very easy to understand, can't wait to continue reading this book
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learn to write well b4 you translate, the grammar is annoying................................................................................
A pretty darn entertaining concept, no glaring grammar faults tho people can always strive to be better over time in how they word and construct sentences.
Anyway, I'm not here to break apart every sentence, the story is fun and lighthearted, I even chuckled a bit during the opening chapter.
If you want something fun then give this one a shot ^-^