Love the premise, hate the execution.
The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together.
There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.
I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
Why reading this novel feels like i am having a deja vu. I think i read this novel 1 or 2 weeks ago. Well some people might like the concept of this novel. But i would love to see a proper world building before the author sends the reader to this new crazy world. Atleast have some proper reason and logic behind why the alien did what they did. Since when they started doing it and etc etc. Also why some many copy paste novel are coming?
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It's slow-paced but I like every bit of it, the mc might be a little bit overwhelmed but all it takes is time to see the progress..
The power is interesting.So i read it.The only - is that mc is too slow.Like really slow, buti hope it change later.................................
I like how you mixed rebirth genre with a story for teenagers. Story seems easy and fun to read love it! I think this story will be a great comedy because I can't imagine a demon being a teenage student and to help other people to ? Cover is preety nice tho!
Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters
Straight up 100/10 I like the story and it's pretty unique, even though it's only a few chapters I already got hooked up,please don't drop this and keep up the great work .
this novel should be called: "I am ****ty copy/paste urban fiction system". i really tried to give this novel a fair chance, but after x novel on the same theme this is absolute trash. it copy/pastes almost every situation that other novels have, does it with totally unrealistic 2d characters in totally unrealistic situations.
dont even bother with it
Too many unnecessary and redundant explanations that takes up more than half of the chapters........................................... 1 star
The Grammer is a bit faulty however the story plot is very well developed. In start it will be boring but as you go further ch 20 you will really understand why this noval is one of the best I have ever read.
Fuuuck !! Autor , dont dropp this ... if you make it, im gonna kill you hahaha ...
Please dont dropp
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