its a good novel destroyed by a sucky translator, dropped it at chapter 64 because of translation quality is low compared to the first 1 to 62 chapter then it become sucks, its also a paid chapter so why is the translation is bad,
for the translator of 1 to 60 thank you for you work
and the rest you SUCK and blue fairy your face SUCK YOU
I've read until the latest chapter and this is actually pretty good!
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The plot twist on the first test of the Lucid Dream Server was actually what I wasn't expecting and also, this book is not what I was expecting when it comes to a virtual reality novel.
Also, I didn't expect that the main character is literally blind. But although he was blind, the story was not boring.
You've outdone yourself, author-san! Thank you so much for your third book and congratulations on getting the contract!
the only bad thing about this webnovel is the author stopped writing it. from the plot, to the characters, it is well rounded and well written. the background on the fantasy world is deep, without forcing information onto you. the MC's growth and personality evolves slowly and at a reasonable pace, and the supporting characters are both well planned and unique.
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i like the novel but i have an issue with webnovel not only did they shorten the tria chapters from 60 to 40 and now that 40 isn't released all at once but now they don't even give us the first 20 chapters free
I dunno how should I say this...the concept of your story is really something new that I've read.I've read upto chapter 6 so far. The story is great...u've given a decent info about the world background and cultivation too in a sense I guess but it just seems kinda bland to me I don't know why! The mentality of MC seems kinda weird to me (in my opinion atleast) one moment he is feeling betrayed and tries to deny the whole thing and in the next he is determined to be the best all of a sudden, and it's not bad but it did feel strange.
All in all its a good story with potential I think, u have good chapter length and great grammar. So keep up the good work man. Cheers!
Well, the book is well-written. The only thing that bothers me is because the MC is totally inexperienced but of course he can also gain that, hoping for the story and the MCs stable growth.
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I love the Qualoty over Quantity approach! I really can't wait to see what other "blocked functions" exist for the system. I wonder if there will ever be some sort of telepathic parasite for communication or some other utility parasite that isnt for staling abilities directly.
A fast moving space adventure full of action, combat, mystery and passion. Reilly doesn't want to be the hero, but is they guy who knows how to fix everything and is usually the smartest person around.
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