Very good story can not wait to read more, so keep it coming. Ya this a good stiry and i have to take up space so that i can post this and im surebthis has yet to reach the right amount of words to be post.
Already know if it's Draekai it will be good, therefore begin reading this and support it just as we do.
*I'm looking to see any Yandere tendecies*
Very nice story, we will follow Tom a mortal at the start to reach the peak!
The character seems very interesting keep it up.
The writing is nice and story has a lot of potential as he travels
Can some one gave me a coin so i can unlock more chapter i really like the story................................................................
Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)?. You can imagine there will be fights in every sentence. The grammar and Punctuation are perfect(haven't been able to find any mistakes).
I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and hope it keeps updating and being just as enjoyable in the future. it was a bit rough at the start but as the story has continued you can see where the author is improving and slowing getting better at writing
Writing quality is a 5 apart from the occasional typo or little mistake. The story develops at a good enough rate, giving it a 5. Though I feel the characters are too empty, with not enough personality, which gives it a 3. Updates are stable, 5 for that. World background is alright, though again feels a bit empty due to having only a bit of info, which earns it a 4. Overall, a gem in the dust, I recommend.
The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister...the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger...I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy. theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb. and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story...Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...
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He made the novel premium promising to make it better ... Its not ... The translation is still bad and shows no signs of improvement ... He also slowed down the story speed so that he can milk this for everything its worth.
Hey authour here yes im shamelessly reviewing myself with 5stars here. But i want yall to know that this is my first novel so the grammar may mot be perfect but i promise you will like the story line so hive it a try please and thank you ;-;