Honestly the story is full of plot holes, but i loved it. I didn't like the ending though. Well it's good enough for a first work. I hope there was more action in all the individual worlds. Sure hope the author's next work is even better than this.
refreshing novel. the first sports genre qidian novel I ever read. in chapter 1 the translation is nice and the editing is good, at least for me. cant wait to continue reading this novel. and to those saying its insult to sport lol read the book first before saying anything. if you still insist to doesnt like this novel then i suggest you don't read it
Review as of chapter 630. Might include minor spoilers but I'll try to keep them to a minimum.
Short Version: Stop scrolling through reviews and just go read the novel!
Long Version: I'll start off by saying that this novel is simply amazing. Stories like this are what keeps me from just deleting the app due to the sheer number of unreadable nonsense it has. Now for an actual breakdown:
Writing Quality - The quality is simply top-notch. No grammatical mistakes, clear and concise sentences that flow into each other beautifully, as well as smooth transitions between different points throughout the story. It's obvious that the author has improved in this regard by quite a bit, compared to his first novel (Lightning is the Only Way), which was already incredible by Webnovel standards.
Story Development - The novel is slow-paced for the most part, and especially at the beginning, but I find that positive in this case, since we get a better look at the struggles Alex (later Shang) has to go through to adapt to a completely new reality where his life is constantly on the line. There are eventual time skips in the story, which are unavoidable simply due to the fact that you can't become a Sword God without hundreds (quite possibly thousands at this rate) years of training.
Character Design - This is the biggest reason for this novel's success. Everyone, and I mean EVERYONE, is fleshed out in such detail that it wouldn't surprise me if the author one day revealed he has been studying the human mind for over 100 years. As for Shang himself, the many hardships he has gone through and the eventual revelation that he is, for reasons I obviously won't mention here, the enemy of the world (Opposer vibes
The quality of writing is quite low, it almost seems as if the author doesn't read the chapters through for mistakes. There are probably 5-10 mistakes in a half page chapter..
The chapters are very short and only contain one scene (almost) but with frequent releases.
The story processes way too fast and doesn't really have a depth. It makes reading it very shallow.
The other also forgets/neglects to explain many things until after the MC has put it to use. You don't get to learn why and how the MC knows the different things.
Also the MC starts of with a personality of a 16-20 year old in the body of a 7 year old... it's just plain stupid and lazy writing of the author in my opinion.
The characters are dull and already after a few chapters, it becomes apparent that they are fillers, even the family of the MC.
The story probably had a lot of potential, but the author needs to develop a better beginning and background before I'd give the story another look.
I love this book and I can't wait for the updates. Author you have done a good job so far.
This novel is so bad, though I don't know if it's the translation quality that makes it so or the original work itself was bad. Regardless, the story is all over the place and the flow is totally out of place.
Regardless, I feel the story idea has potential. Just that I found ploughing through it very taxing.
Don't recommend it to anyone. Try it at your own risk.
so the mc is supposedly pretty smart but then does some idiotic things. but, he got better toward the end so there's hope yet. I've read alot of worse CNs. one thing I'd like to say is that so far the old guys in this story rock! their fighting spirit is great lol!!! I'll keep reading once the rest is released.
no more words. thanks for the story!............................................................................................................................................................
The book is pretty good. The start was above average, OP MC might not be for everyone but the author handled it right at the beginning . The characters, main and side, started developing nicely. The story line was good too, plenty of mystery and story lines to keep you
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It seems to be this. There's like 429 000 words. Summary's slightly different, so I added it.
Su Mu took the player panel. Came to the Savage Era 10,000 years ahead of schedule. Body with the most common talent for players: ... immortality. Although longevity, but the level experience is locked. In this dangerous world, in order to be able to live forever in peace, only cultivation cultivation and then cultivation! Time Ran, the wind and clouds change. Once casually rescued cubs, became the first era of domination. Followed by the side of the partner, became a new era of the side of the realm master. The men who were treated as tools became the mysterious powers of the world! The unfamiliar beings who were instructed by hand also steadily increased in strength in the middle of the epoch, and gradually became a party bearer. Era evolution, also because of Su Mu's intervention to change ... years later, the players came, but they found that the world, although no Su Mu figure, but everywhere there are legends of him. After successive encounters, the players who decided to become Su Mu leeks suddenly realized: "So... only he is the savior of our players!" Su Mu, who was shrouded in mist, saw the well-behaved players and pulled out the...lower grade feats that had been dismantled into hundreds of pieces... "I'm so sweet, next time I'll dismantle it into 10,000 copies!"
I tried reading this, but it was just way too confusing with the transition of the plot and i was left having no idea what the hell was happening. Im not sure if he has an editor or not but this story sure as hell needs a good one.
Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.