Don't be fooled by the title, this novel is much better than it suggest.
It's basicaly normal cultivation nover where the MC joins the Beastmaster sect, so he will go the route of training beasts but he can also fight for himself.
Although it is not a fast paced story, the development is quite good and the world building is well explained.
The strong point of this novel is that the characters are not brainless, the MC is cautios and acts acordig to logic.
I think it's a cultivation novel with high potencial so I hope it gets picked up.
Novels tell stories but not this one
This is a textbook where the author rambles about geography, it is either forest, ocean or mountain, don't be surprised if it is monotonous what with the severe lack of creativity
The mc does a bunch of random things each chapter with no plan or goals, mc is hence bland and boring, as expected from a guy who monologues each chapter
Mc is an idiot which is common in novels where the mc has unlimited power but a mind of a 10 year old, this is the consequence of no character development after all how can you have character development with no conflict
(overpowered mcs from the start rarely have conflicts) yet some authors can pull it of but not this one
Overall it gives the impression that the author has no idea that there are readers, therefore spending each chapter rambling about random things with no flow or planning (why post a novel online when all you do is indulge in yourself)
My conclusion:
This is a textbook and not a novel, the only way to avoid this is to plan your work and get opinions from friends and readers.
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After reading 130 chapters.
There are quite few things I like very much about this book that I would like to share:
1. Characters aren't flat, one-sided and brainless, quite the opposite complexity, daily struggles and depth are normal. I especially love that MC isn't plowing through everybody and everything but makes mistakes and suffers the consequences. There is only one small flew in few characters, it's their a bit cliche humor.
2. World building is quite complex and feels real, not making the reader question if other characters are mental or physics doesn't exist.
3. Realism is best served when there are heavy topics involved and nobody has a perfect simple solution, which is the case here.
4. Only one thing that I kinda dislike is a bit slow paced action and I don't mean the timeline of actions, because I would even like for the MC to progress more painfully, but the dialogues between characters reveling their mental state.
Hope it helps, I really like this book so far, I'll update my review after or around chapter 200.
A wonderful action-packed story with a unique point of view. The writer is very talented with a wide imagination. Well-written novel. Keep writing!
interesting story. Even though it only has 4 chapters so far, I have a feeling that this story will only get better. I really love reading it. Keep up the good work. I hope you will update this book frequently. I'll be looking forward to seeing more chapters from you.
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It a good story till now. The world background is confusing till now but still, it is interesting, I think the author is deliberating doing this. But it is annoying.
this is my first ever review on webnovel I don't write them because I am lazy but this ... this is just utter garbage totally unrealistic and waste of time I read two chapters only two and fell like I have lost brain cells.its like a child wrote it
This story has no flow or plot. It’s essentially the author going, what should I do next? Then doing it, no matter if it makes sense in the story or leaves a massive plot hole
Writing quality 5/5
story development 4/5
character design 5/5
updating stability 1/5 (1y and still no update)
world background 4/5
UPDATE PLSSSSSSSSSSSS
good one does anyone know raw novel please comment below, it's different from what I read before