I like the novel. There's a bit of critique, but that's their preference. There are also a lot of 5-star ratings.
If there were grammar issues, that's not a big problem. Editing it oneself is such a pain so just nicely comment about wrong grammars if you see it. Even if I see it, I just ignore lol.
One of the things I want to salp out of the novel is having the Mc sleeping with his teacher. Well, idk what happened cuz I haven't read the new chapters.
I just stopped cuz I wanted a platonic heroine. :P
Not for me.Ugh I thought webnovel was past this.Bad novel......................................, .............................................
Amazing story building and character development. The only problem is with the lack of chapters despite the fact that the last update was over 2 years ago. Hopefully it is still ongoing and soon updates.
I love the story
Every twist
Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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I absolutely recommend this novel to everyone. It is one of my favourite novels and even though the plot starts a bit slow, if you keep reading few more chapters, you will realize it is definitely worth reading! The characters are well characterized an what makes this novel so interesting is the fact that it mix game elements with cultivation world elements.
This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .
One Word- Interesting
Two Words- Unique Harem
Three Words- Vampire Main Character
Four Words- System that awakens late
Five Words- Come on, just read it!
feels good to read. please continue and will there be an oc character and it and what will be the future update rate. seems full of potential
I haven't read a science fiction story, but I enjoy watching science fiction movies. I like the story about having a special ability. I haven't read the tournament chapter yet, but I know it's good. I really like your work. Keep updating!
Japanese beta shota Protagonist brain, he takes punches and kicks and blows to his body like it is normal and correct occurrence and maybe pleasure. Absolutely no control of his emotions and...I am speechless. I got angered for no reason reading the first chapters. What is unique or not so used is that, this is based in Nigeria(Africa)
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