The Other Side of A Cultivation Story

The quality of writing is quite low, it almost seems as if the author doesn't read the chapters through for mistakes. There are probably 5-10 mistakes in a half page chapter..
The chapters are very short and only contain one scene (almost) but with frequent releases.
The story processes way too fast and doesn't really have a depth. It makes reading it very shallow.
The other also forgets/neglects to explain many things until after the MC has put it to use. You don't get to learn why and how the MC knows the different things.
Also the MC starts of with a personality of a 16-20 year old in the body of a 7 year old... it's just plain stupid and lazy writing of the author in my opinion.
The characters are dull and already after a few chapters, it becomes apparent that they are fillers, even the family of the MC.
The story probably had a lot of potential, but the author needs to develop a better beginning and background before I'd give the story another look.

I must say that eversince this novel has been featured in the main page (today), it instantly gained a lot of recognition.. and got a lot of comments, votes and reviews.. and I’m grateful for it..

It’s just unfortunate that I find it hard to adjust the novel in accordance with some of the comments and suggestions as the chapters have already been built a bit far so much so that a little change could impair some portion of the plot..

But to the rest of the recommendations, I’ll be sure to find a way to include them in the future chapters—especially those that I failed to foresee as I write the chapters daily..  so rest assured that many of your questions will be answered in the future..

So keep on reading.. Thanks a lot for all the comments, votes and reviews.. they will definitely be helpful to improve the story..

Qairi

Like many of you, I am also just a fan and an avid reader of light novels who have gone through a lot of imagination everytime I read through the chapters of a story.. so I am not actually a professional writer..

This novel is actually my first.. I don’t know, it’s just that one day I started to conceptualize my own idea of cultivation world.. and then inspiration suddenly kicked in to write it down in the midst of my own personal schedule.. and I say my work was way way far from perfect but it was fun doing it..

I then took all the courage I could muster just to upload the first few chapters I made about three months ago because I wanted to share what I started to write..

I do feel a bit sad that there are holes in the story that I failed to see which somehow disappointed some of the readers but I don’t feel discouraged at all.. in fact I feel that those things push me to improve this work..

So I’m kind of happy how many of the readers reacted to the story especially when some of you even discussed things in the comment section..

So thank you, hope you continue reading..

Qairi

For me, no matter how genius a child is it wouldn't change the fact that he is still a child and that there would be times that a genius would express himself in a way a child does. However our ML doesn't, it would probably be more convincing if he was a reincarnated person than just simply a genius.

Next would be the reactions of other villages/chiefs, normally they would be alarmed seeing a developing place as it may turn out to be a threat to their own territories.  Also it's a bit unnerving seeing(well reading) adults not having any complaints about a 7 year old child(even if we say he is a genius) butting in / doing a deal with them.

Well, I'm not all knowing or a great writer but that's just what I noticed that seems to be a bit out of place. But other than that it shows a very unique flow  and not using much of the norms in such genre. And I cant really make such impression on the story so ill be taking more chapters before reviewing again.

Thank you for this novel. At the beginning I was reading the reviews that said the base of the story is going fast, and yes to me that would be true if the focus of the story is the cultivation part of Mc. I feel like even though the Mc of the story is Qai and his goals that he is trying to achieve, this story is also about his family as a whole and its transformation to a great sect within their generation which is the dream incision by our Mc. So if the author slowed down the development of the story then I am afraid the story would not be as interesting as it is now.

So dear author thank you for your hard work and please keep on sharing your story as you envisioned it and we will be glade to follow this world you created.

i  want to ask ..way the skill cant be teached to others ?? and the formatoins and restractins from were they will learn it ?, from the beasts?? if every time they go higher in coltvation they have to pay skills for them salf..way not writing what they learn and after that they teach it to others ?when they reach a very high level from where will they get the skills..??