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I don't know what words to say but damn \\(≧▽≦)/ I Like it!! Author I want to say that I really enjoyed it and I like all the elements! The writing style is amazing! The world Background is well explained and so far its developing well! And its becoming more and more interesting!!Thanks for writing and Please keep updating<( ̄︶ ̄)>
keep it up......................
Nice parody, man. I haven’t been reading or writing a lot, so I’m out of touch with a lot. Interesting to see this though. Time to jump into other trash.
I've been known to ignore plot holes, as long as the other factors are good enough, but even I cannot stretch disbelief this far. The details are so lacking I feel giving the world background one star is giving it too much credit.
Finally something decent again.. its been a while.
Especially in terms of translation WN has been getting really bad recently so please pick this one not the MTL bs.
Hi , people author here , I read most of the comments and reviews on this book and I want to give a good news to you people , about ten days later , I and other native editor and a person who has experience in editing the books will going to edit the book from the start.So for now , thank you guys for all kind of comments and reviews , just know that book will not going to stay like this and it will be edited , thank you !
Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok.. so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...
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Man!!! This is a wild ride! I can see such world building and detailed writing reach 2000+ chapters if continued properly. I also like the comedy here and there and the feeling of the characters having their own personalities being portrayed during exchanges.
I could feel myself reading Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones again.
Nice job!!! Keep it up!
1. good story all in all but there a lot of plot armor and plot convenience so if you dont like those warning. 2. as pinoy myself all i can say is "NOICE".3. HOPE YOU PUT THE 9 MOON/SUN EATERS (PICTURE BELOW)
#who knows the the mtl or raw link?where's the next chap!!!???? !?!;!!&-(£+(-£+( @webnovel what happened to the next chapter, huh!?...
