Not gonna lie. I was really excited in the beginning. I thought MC is not going to be some kind of pushover but his own man. He couldn't care less about king and the royalty, and to be honest i liked it and I hoped it would stay that way. But boy was I wrong. The selfish "hero" turned out to be typical cliche virgin that shits his pants whenever girl touches him.
But let's leave that aside. The first thing that surprised me was the absolute idiocy of the MC and side characters.
"Oh you have just found a legendary fox that is known in legends as a beast that burns everything to the ground with its hellish flames?
LET'S TALK ABOUT PUBLICLY SO EVERYONE KNOWS."
"Oh you have formed a party with some douchebags that you don't trust aparat from the Hunter and Samurai-sensei? Let's tell them that you own a legendary beast. Especially when two of the members are dodgy AF at that point."
"Oh you want to go to another kingdom (that would gladly go to war with yours) to loot an ancient Tomb that belong to a noble family? Oh go ahead but change your face because you're too famous. Oh, oh and don't bother with changing your name because it's really hard to connect the dots between a rising star of a hero and a random overpowered 20lvl character of the same name, especially when you tell your enemies that your name is real.
Also don't forget the overpowered item that makes you invisible but don't use it to escape from the tomb. Threaten the noble families instead so it can result in your girlfriend death. But hey you just got yourself another girlfriend!"
Then the worst happend. The harem. My god is it crap. Everyone falls for MC after 15 minutes of knowing him. Then MC is FORCED to double marriage, and 2 other girls want to sleep with/marry him. He turnes into a complete virgin-pushover. I was reading through it hoping that those girls would die out at some point so the author can actually start writing a good story, but as of 200+ chapter it's only getting worse. The interactions between the MC and his wives/concubines are really dry and annoying. They are actally worse than fillers in Bleach anime.
And the sad part is, those interactions are getting more and more common. Those 'lovely' wives have a almost non-existant personality.
Actually decent characters like the Hunter and Samurai are barely talked about later on. The main focus is on the harem.
Most human opponents MC meets are just typical, cliche, prideful young masters that get whooped in three sentences.
By the way, don't get it twisted. I don't mean that the MC should be ruthless and merciless psycho. I just wish he had some interesting personality, backbone or something. Anything honestly.
Because of that i decided to drop it at around chapter 230ish.
My english might not be the best as it's not my first language so my apologies if reading this hurt your brain in anyway ♥.
Sorry for the rant but this story just annoyed me.
Waste of coins/free passes. Do not recommend.
This is a masterpiece that should get chosen and continued as fast as possible so they wouldn't make us disappointed as what happened with 'the demon's menu' and 'calamity of tomorrow'
I realy enjoy when the MC is not limited to the typical generic morals. The MC is not a "good guy" neither are most of his rivals it is like a breath of fresh air when you are constantly trying to find a book with an evil protaganist and you find one but when you find one that is well writen it is awesome. The author updates regularly.
Here's your worst review, good job. The mc with his 160 IQ somehow managed to be a retard. The saving the little girl was so fucking cliche you might as well make him actually be a prince, better yet why not her a princess too? The way you write situation is very annoying too. Here's an example of what it feels like: "MC could run five miles." "No, actually MC could run 10 miles if he wanted to". It always sound like you're contradicting yourself jesus christ, just write it as it is.
I will be shameless here and give my novel 5 stars. It's a novel that I had created after much thought. I had first thought of a showbiz novel like my previous one but decided on this after seeing that there aren't many novels that focus on authors. So, I wrote this one. Releases will be 1 chapter per day and there will be romance in this novel, a possessive and dangerous romance. >_<
So, I was browsing and I came across this gem out of nowhere. And while it may not be perfect, it's way better than most of the original novels here. It's interesting and I read it all in one sitting. Give it a chance, I'm sure it won't disappoint.
The revoked a star from the writing quality is simply on grammar, and a few spelling mistakes. Some of your sentences are a little choppy, but other than that well done. I'm not sure on your stability in updates, so I just gave it a 5 as to not retract from your overall score. The story development is quite good! I really enjoy how the powers are presented and explained, and how in depth it goes. The character is well rounded, though in my opinion he is a little stupid :> Still, I gave you five stars because personal opinion shouldn't result in a retraction of a star. Through the chapters I read, it is very difficult to get a clear view of what is around the MC. I think describing the area more would help with that! It's not too bad though, so I only retracted one star. Well done :>
I 100% loved the story until one of the chapters said that Mc fiancé was raped by the nobleman, and I fu*king hate ntr. This was an automatic drop for me
MC plays betas without NPC's and quests.. just hunting & grinding levels lol okay. This novel is too one dimensional, characters are meh.. MCs character seems broken. It's not exciting to read at all
Fuck Qidian. Fuck Webnovel. This novel isn't on trial read anymore, so it's been dropped. They fucking do this all the time, drop the good novels that has one of the highest ratings and consumer reviews, but instead they pick some second rate shit. This platform is ****ed.