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Its a little bland for me(own opinion), It felt bland for me because of how many times I have read novels like this.
I felt that when I stop reading ill stop forever type of thing that could easily get bored at.
Also some part of the chapters I felt I have read before in another novel.
The others were right, this does give me a faint sense of deja vu... anyone else reminded of [A Celestial Emperor’s Self-Cultivation] when reading this? To the person who was hoping for the plot to be original, wish for something more realistic next time.
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the story looks interesting characters are well written or that what it seems. the is only one thing that bugs me is that the MC is too shallow(from my perspective) also the author should emphasize more on how the choices of MC impacts his life as well as the life of people around him.
PS.keep up the good work up Author-kun there aren't many yandere romance novels here.
It starts a bit slow but once you are inmersed in the plot, the intrigue doesnt let go. I would recommend it to young readers who are looking for adventure and mystery involving a bit of history.
Hello author, someone is here to appreciate your work. That was so good. I love this. I am glad I checked this out. waiting for more.... In my library already. Good work author. .. Keep going...
I want to inform everyone that on December 31st, I will be rewriting the FIRST three Novels, ever wrote ad it will mark three years I have been on the platform and they will be available on Webnovel and Honeyfeed.
Hi author The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job. May the stars align for him.
Yunno, I wasn't expecting much from the synopsis. I thought it would just be the usual outcast rising to glory story but I was wrong. Philip is incompetent only physically, his mind is nothing like that. I don't think his mother died from natural causes, i suspect that she was assassinated or poisoned because he couldn't rule and the crown prince would be of questionable birth if his mother wasn't the Queen.Moldovia's royalty, huh? she's a huge suspect, her son, Daniel and his father too. It's funny how peoples character change in the twinkle of an eye. one minute the maid's giving him an open invitation, the next she's glaring because he rejected her advances. An the ridiculous part is she thinks that he didn't see her. Just plain old greed for a prince who won't even ascend the throne.The plot is very rich. Keep it up, author.
I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel, Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).BYE
The concept is cool, the execution not so much. The sentence structure is terrible, and the writing style is bland. I feel like the story is there, it's just not well conveyed due to the lack of proper grammar and logical story progression.
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