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Just read the novel up to the latest chapter and enjoyed it so far.
There are few grammar mistakes here and there but the novel is readable.
The story is fast paced I'd say. Every chapter is impactful to the plot rather than fillers.
Hope the author can keep going.
At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.
it's a great read. the pacing is good and the story always leaves room to develop further. I would definitely pick this up when your between reads.
is this been dropped? or there is an alternate name? kindly answer please I like this kind of story
I don't feel much about anything in this moment. I added to library so its worth reading. It's kind of different narufic. No insta sharingan or wood release. I don't give much for world background in fanfics until authors go for some new places or absolutely reimagine existing places. Rest is fine. I will come back later for update if things go west or south. Good luck.
So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.
love the plot suspense ?took my time to read it over again, looking forward to more updates love it ?
Overall this novel is pretty good, the protagonist is interesting and while the story is not that amazing it's still pretty interesting and good enough for a fun read
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honestly when I started reading it was good it has a decent background for characters, it also had a really good story, I can not wait to see how the story progresses.
I love this book so much. Pleaseee update more! I can't wait to see the new chapters caming. Goodluck my friend.Wish you the best for the contest
While this novel is quite good, it has some nationalism content. To be more specific, it's about Li ziqi's video in which she made kimchi, a Korean national dish but claimed it's from China. The relationship between China and other Asian countries has been tense recently because China claim that others culture is theirs. Anyway, the author support the notion that Kimchi is from China so for me even if the novel is entertaining, it's a nope.
