I liked this story... up to a point.
If you are interested in mechs, mech battles and upgrades, this is a story you'll definitely like. This story painted the lifestyle so well it almost made me go out and purchase the latest Mechwarrior game out on Steam!
The world background makes sense, the character backgrounds are interesting and a bit mysterious, and their progression makes sense and is consistent.
The only thing that was off for me was their emotional states.
Most of the time, the emotional reactions of the characters are within human norms and are believable. Kids get frustrated with their parents, or are wary about their teachers, or have a love of mechs because they are "cool". It's later on in the story that I have some issues.
When a big loss hits our main character, he doesn't seem sad per se. He just stays around to do what he can then moves on to complete his task. There is little to no reflection of him mourning that loss or that loss affecting him emotionally or inhibiting him. Later, he finds what he has lost but there is no sense of real relief from him. It's just another day, it seems, and life goes on. The same thing happens to the other characters around him. They encounter losses but don't really feel the loss. It's almost like they are brainwashed or on drugs. Or it is just a tragic story that happened on the news. It doesn't affect how they live their lives (even though it happened to them or people they knew).
So while overall I'd rate the story as a 4, I am dropping reading this story because of the lack of emotional development of the characters. If you don't really care about that sort of thing and love mech stories, it's worth a read.
honestly the novel is just great and also YOU DONT NEDD TO PAY like some many people make novels where ya have to pay like 700 bucks to read the whole thing but this author is a legend and doesn't make it pay to read
when will you update? i need new chapters please
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1 star for premium at 100 chapters, not worth it!
It has everything that a proper trash novel sholud have. An mc with average brains surrounded by super dumb charecters and one dimensional antoganists.story is also of the worst kind - they call him trash and he face slaps them with his cheats help.i also think from reading till latest chapter and their comments that the author might be a racist snob.
5 stars for this book. the beginning so far is really promissing. It pulles the reader into the story and i hope that the content in the future lifes up to it.
Eine echt gute und düstere Geschichte. Ich fand schon immer die Schurken die Stadt mit Muskelkraft lieber mit ihrem Gehirn gearbeitet haben besser. Ganz besonders die Schurken, die aus Gotham kommen da sie in der Regel auch ein wenig verrückt sind weshalb ihr genialen Einfälle besonders interessant sind.
Danke für die Geschichte und ich hoffe dass ich vielleicht doch in der Zukunft fortgesetzt wird.
The overall story is a bit different from regular reincarnation video game stories. The protagonist is totally OP. I do not really understand the logic of the GM considering his weapon as legit. The whole attachment should not exist in the timeline in the first . We need to find a sensible reason for the existence of the weapon. The chapters are short in the beginning but eventually increase in length which is a good thing. The most disappointing part was to discontinue this story and create another book with a more detailed story line. I am disappointed because the new book did not catch up to this one yet.
Fantastic. Great pace of advancement in the beginning, i hope it will continue and not begin to slow down like some authors. Fantastic writing style and well explored cultivation system. A rare gem. great job author
My first novel in this web, so far so good. I recommend this to anyone who like fantasy novel...........................................................
Good novel at the start ruined by the Author.
Spoilers ahead
Now this is gonna be pretty long so stop after this first paragraph if you can't be bothered. Well this novel has only one good point in my opinion and that was the beginning more specifically the word building after that everything was trash. Mc got dumber by the chapter the author did much more dumb **** that made this so much harder to read and his/her lack of good grammar didn't help either now I am no expert but at least I have basic grammar I think.
Apart from that this is more to do with the Mc the first few hunting trips he only went out with 2 out of the 5 skills and his friends die oh buhoo he spent 5 days he could have used to get stronger and for revenge crying like a dumb a** now this isn't that bad some people are more emotional than others but come on man his "trauma" is so bad that he kills level 2 bunnies till he's level 12 and it worked out for him really because he got a title which upped his stats and level apart from that he gets the ai helper or what ever and instead of levelling it up bit by bit he decides to wait till he can mass level it. Oh and the funniest thing about that is although the Ai got more info or was allowed to share more info it got a personality while that isn't too bad at the chaos dragon cave it actually impeded him because it was annoyed at him and didn't want to tell him somethings now if it was a dire situation he would have been royally f*cked.
Now also this guy has a hidden stat that has a recharge time which is so long it's stupid and he forgets to deactivate and or activate it and the Ai tell him it knows how to make him stronger well I don't know about you but if I had such a stat I would wish for some op monsters to fight be weakened and than be so weak that I can kill them for mass levelling but lucky him it seems the Ai had another way because plot demanded it and it was to get a super special bloodline now man why would you add bloodlines in this like seriously it may just be my preference but when it is battle of ascension and probably humanity has to "ascend" shouldn't they mostly being doing it by them selves and not with help from the other species I mean the vibe I was getting off it was at a point they would have to fight the other races like demons devils etc and if it goes this route if they fight dragons then it doesn't even make sense anymore in my opinion but this bit really is like Is aid my opinion.
A part from this guy mistakes this op bloodline for some semi decent potion leave luck on meets love interest that is unlikeable and irritating and the situation end up in one of the only ways that a girl could possibly get close enough to him a see that shrivel of a thing that was good about him with out immediately running a way and trying to forget about him. Also one of the most infuriating things is this guy sells a legendary saber just because he can't use it none of his family can and he wants to open his mothers restaurant. Now I don't know about you but when you're looking for allies or think you are gonna look for allies (this refers to his future plan) you should find a strong saber user and give he/she the saber GOD F*CKING D*AMN IT!
Terrible novel good world building at the start ruined by the AUTHOR not the Mc because he created this **** fest.