He walked to the front of the crowd, where a puppet was currently taking down the reservation of a disciple.
Players has levelled up to Level 10!
"Why... are... we... even.... running...?" Isse asked between breaths. Even though Sword-mages were middle range warriors, they often clashed in close range, like Swordsmen. He shouldn't be out of breath with just this.
Best novel ever!!!Overall, for those fantasy, mystery, thriller and horror lover, this is a perfect choice for you.Mass Release!!! ???
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I shall be honest this was difficult to actually read due to the grammar errors but as that was already covered I shall move on. Whilst I am no writer myself I shall give you some of my thoughts. Try to be more consistent with numbers you start with mid 2500-2627 then you state the exact range 2580-2627 (which is late 2500's not middle). Also use the units of measure for example years. " and it was technology from 2600." could be and it was technology from the year 2600. or it was technology from the 27th century. It helps clarify when you have multiple unit types. examples are stats, damage or time.To help with grammar you could try "Grammarly" I have not used it myself but its supposed to be free so at worst you decide it doesn't suit you. Let me know if this helped ill check it again in a few days and see how the story is going.
A good start for a cultivation-themed novel. But that also means it needs a bit more chapters before it the story can really shine. Great writing, literally and figuritavely, for the author. But the later chapters are different compared to the first few. (Author did mention it)Cultivation is a tricky genre to go into because there are already more than what I can imagine. Like I said, it will take a few more chapters before it can be something unique but I believe this story has the potential.
I'm gonna cry because there aren't enough chapters. I need more, please sir.?The cultivation premise is so interesting and the fluff is killing me.
Man, it is too short, I'd like for this story to be longer... And tbh it coulda been longer...there is a lot of potential and hard work in that story.
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I'll give you a 5 star rating. It's like I'm watching a movie rather than reading it. of course, if you have great imagination ?. so interesting and you would be very curious as to whom and how. keep it up writer
DAYUM its only been like a few months and there is already over 200 chapters noice i left at 67 and I'm gonna give it a go again,As far as i have read, it was good the mc is likable except some cliche situations that are not used a lot, he is overpowered too, i forgot about the development of the world but im guessing it was fine as i have read far