War of Pantheons

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The more the story progresses the more boring it becomes.Till now I do not understand what is the value of the system. It is like some bounty on his head and for months he is not progressing in cultivation. Man, this is supposed to be a system novel.

A good start for a cultivation-themed novel. But that also means it needs a bit more chapters before it the story can really shine. Great writing, literally and figuritavely, for the author. But the later chapters are different compared to the first few. (Author did mention it)Cultivation is a tricky genre to go into because there are already more than what I can imagine. Like I said, it will take a few more chapters before it can be something unique but I believe this story has the potential.

-Por lo menos es divertido entrenar con ustedes.