Finished the Story. Lots of Spoilers.This story has few things going for it but many things against it. The story is 5(?) story written by the author and is probably the latest one. The story was completed just 5 months ago. And this brings us to the problem. How can author with such experience write such a poor story?It's short and fast but the story itself is neither funny nor intresting enough to keep your attention.Pros :1: With 660 chapters it's a pretty short Xianxia and System Novel.2: It has slight comedic elements.3: It's a system novel.Apart from these three I couldn't find any reason to read this story.Cons :1: MCs character is highly one dimensional and conflicting. His behaviour changes with his mood. One moment he is preaching peace and the next he is destroying a whole sect and murdering everyone from the Ancestor to new recruits.2: His motive to gain power is poor. The whole story is poorly executed. Power so he can relax and enjoy? Okay. But here you are trying extremely hard to do so when you could have done it through way simpler methods.3: Lots of plot holes, incomplete story lines and half way buildup. Whether it's the flame tatoo he gets after killing a Buddhist Sect Ancestor or is the Dark god realm. Same way, it's not explained properly whether the Alliance is from other dimension, is one the same planet but just divided by a barrier or they from another planet. It just doesn't makes any sense. Similarly, what exactly is that nine headed bug? Way too many incomplete story lines.4: Cultivation system is shabby? Incomplete? Hastily made? I have no idea what to say. Almost all cultivation novels have becoming God as an end point. Here, it's not so. His strength makes him the strongest but the cultivation realm is not so. Their are many people in the same cultivation level. Thats it 5: The way he earns anger is through thrash talking. There are so many ways he could have earned anger. Vandalism, pranking, stealing...but no, the only way he thinks to do so is through the thrash talk.6: System. It basically converts anger points to cultivation attributes. But it's not expanded upon. It's origin, it's end, its function. Nothing. Above all, after few chapters author just makes up some anger point number to suit his requirements.All ina ll. Poor story.
WARNING NOT FINISHEDI really enjoyed this story despite all the gender mix ups after ch40. my main issue is the story just stops, there is no ending just a massive cliff hanger in the middle of an arc. I hope others cam save their money because I was very disappointed. the development and concept were great and I was looking forward to see how it all was suppose to finish.
It's been more than 4 years since this novel started. The chapter frequency per week is very low. At this rate it may take another 2-3 years to catch up with the original source of this novel.
Website : qidian china Views : 1.07 million Rating : 8.8(394) Chapters : 926 Status : ongoing Word count : 3.12 million author rank : lv5
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I just discovered this little gem and you can be proud of it, hard things to say on this site but I find the idea of wanting to become a hero at all costs completely ridiculous and childish, no need for a cape and to run around New York to be a hero Helping people with his business is much better. I hope the MC is not going to be part of the Avengers otherwise it will ruin everything The Avengers are an unprofessional time bomb. It's just going to waste her time. He could hack into Wakanda and use the data to advance medicine and things. If he wants to wear a costume then he just has to do it for help IronMan with IronMonger and enjoy having arc reactors and other technological parts,Go to Harlem and steal Bruce's blood and fight the abomination, playing heroes will be a secondary objective but will give him a good image. Help spiderman with the goblin, and have Peter as employee. Developed W.E and beat Tony in his own Stark expo. Perfected B.W so SHIELD won't notice Baby photos and you loll, Make a believable story behind. SHIELDRA is going to want to search to manipulate him like Stark so watch the spy and have a real lab in his basement, surrounded by vibranium and impossible to hack for the SHIELD. put a tracker on the loki scepter and steal it from Hydra. Learn magic or build your own teleportation portal With these clear memories of the movies he can travel to different planets, Xander and steal stuff like the power stone on MORAG. Stealing alien technologies ect.Take out an element before Tony and take the glory, an alien element that already exists. Combination of nanotechnologies. Making a new team, the Avengers are not the only ones, CAge, Jessica, Daredevil, Spiderman, Save mutants and give them work and a suit with a hidden face and therefore secret identity. I can't wait to read more.
The MC is the slave of the system and the gods. Why would anyone help someone else to become strong to rule them. That's just plain stupid. Why would anyone want to live like that. He just should had killed himself at least should've free from this bull****.
I like it. its a good balance of sports and love and shows the improvement slowly. Its well written in my opinion........................................
Honestly either my favorite book or second favorite. Close tie with Reincarnation of Strongest Sword God. Author seems to take extreme care to edit out his typos and fix any grammar issues so it's a very smooth read. If you like a villain or anti hero MC then this book is definitely for you, as the MC is easily one of my top fave characters out of multiple books.
Great book, an amazing potential that was barely tapped into. The ending is rushed and absolutely outrageous, should be criminal. Nice combat system and world-building ( the best part ).
the story was a pleasure to read, different from the other book, hope it will be faster to update new chapters because cannot wait to read it!!!!
such a great Story and so detailed. i really liked the way you wrote about the unterworld and i Look forward to read the next Storys!!