Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.
-different world connected to earth-god and goddess, demon emperor-turn back to time-the main character is having a journey to enjoy different woman in pleasure
Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.
The story thus far is pretty good actually. The philosophy of the characters and the personalities and interest they all have makes them very fun to read about. The Mc is a sweet little cinnamon roll (whose going to hopefully be a real ~man~ in the future ;)) there are very few grammatical errors in this novel, and the development of the characters are going smoothly. It’s too early to say much about the plot and world development, but so far everything is well written and easy to understand. The updates seem to be once every 2 days so far and the am really looking forward to the decisions that these...~boys~ will make next.
Still waiting for the big gay, it'll happen at some point, just gotta wait a couple years until then. Also I would like to mention how a bee should be unable to fly. You see, the bee is much larger than its smol wings can carry, but by some logic, the wings carry the bee and it can fly, such a wondrous sight, but a odd one.
Story started out great... But it keeps on going downhill...The first problem started when almost all villians always escape even when the MC is equiped with very powerful talismans and artifacts... Even the mother one of the top immortals who is very overprotective ignores the escapees after she finds out...The second problem was the Lovespot arc... Even the way the sect dealt with the problem by helping their bottom level immortal and his wasteful grandson is stupid... Since most of the immortals and the sect master are not their family... Makes it very stupid decision and from the top sect... Makes you wonder how they remained the top sect if they make low level entry mistakes like this...Third problem is Tianyi's trauma which doesn't make sense... For him to be scared of all Nascent Soul Cultivators after he was almost killed by a reincarnated and regressor cultivator with memories and techniques of many cultivators doesn't make sense... The trauma could have been of the dragon emperor, regressors or reincarnators or atleast soul cultivators... Him being afraid of Nascent Soul Cultivators after almost being killed by an abnormal does not make sense...Last and the newest is the recent problem... All of a sudden Yushan who has been a role model senior brother and a good sect cultivator at heart is obsessed with Daoyi... He is so focused on her that he is souring relationships with everybody... For a person who valued relationships this came out of left field...The major problem with all these is that they are main points with affect the plot and they are dragging the novel down... Makes it seem like the author forgets about most things he writes therefore ends up contradicting himself...
Five stars because i feel like it,Its not like everytime i read it i always end up with a smile or something it's only because i feel like it that I commented and rated.
I write for funnovel concept: crown inheritance raceacademy s.o.lmultiple leadsshort chapters- hard to manage if chapters are too long I find
This is the second novel on any aplication that I am willing to spend money and time to read it no matter what. I am here to say it's worth to read this novel.Glory is not only game but it's our life.
Like all other reviewers talking about this novel, I would like to say that it is a very good read and have a lot of world building put into it. It also gave the players own perspective into things and I quite like that. But like other novels I've read, there are parts that irritated me and other people while reading this novel. Thus, if you can get past some of the irritating moments and continue reading it then you might just get your times worth.(This might be my second or third time reviewing a novel on this app... I don't remember, so please bear with my words being so jumbled up.)
Never seen worse human interaction. The amount off BS that is displayed in the first like 15 chapters is incredible. The MC is completely beta and acceptes everything. You jump over a plot hole only to realise your falling into another.
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