[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is fresh and different from what I had r mostly, the system decrease his power.. Wow.. Hope the idea is executed well in further chapters
A new interesting novel, even it has a few chapters it's really caught up my attention.
I'd like how you detailed the world and the descriptive words used. Thanks for the new fantasy novel.
Keep it up, Author!
I love this storyline, I think it is absolutely amazing!
I just can't man, has been a while since I read such an unabashed power trip, if it's what you set up to write author more power to ya, I'll just stop here, this LitRPG system makes no sense to me.
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
............................................................................................................................................
One word. Descriptive. Yes, descriptive. Very descriptive that you can imagine the gore scene. And the funny thing is, it is satisfying to read the way the author describes the even. I don't know if something is wrong with me lol.
MAPS BROTHER MAPS. Put a few maps in the description. We need maps in kingdom building novels. Even though it is the civil enengineer in me speaking.
another sign in novel
...........................................................................................................................
Great book, it’s amazing, still liked when it was free but hey I’m happy your getting recognition.
Author here!
This review is going to be different than my first review.
talking about the ratings above,
•the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers!
• the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol.
And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong.
Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong.
• character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed.
• World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further