Hi... I'm kind of frustrated at the moment from reading all the comments. Even though they are not rude, it still hit me since I didn't meet the readers' expectations. And as for that, please forgive me. I will still produce the best quality I could offer.
This review isn't about me showing or wanting some pity. I want to the readers know that even I can't be the best writer, I'll be the most understanding writer. I'm taking all of the suggestions and reading plenty of light novels if I have time to widen my horizon, thus, I just want people to understand my concerns.
This novel isn't usually a type of fantasy novel that is common or a trope that is repetitively used in the platform. I took a risk to implement such a trope so hope you appreciate it even it's not in the best of you could expect.
These all I felt is something I understand. Normally, you won't receive praises every time and criticism will try to hit your shortcomings. It's helpful, I know it, however, I still can't help but feel anxious every time I see a number in my inbox (you know what I'm saying).
So, instead of blabbering about my sentiments, I want to let people know that I am still an amateur. I didn't have any training or so, that's why I am still in the process of improving my work.
I do mistakes. It's pretty common to me since I'm not a native English speaker (even those who are native speakers still make mistakes as 'no one is perfect').
What are my mistakes in this novel?
Misused adjectives and adverbs. It's not common and at least you could stumble upon those funny mistakes like 2 out of 10 chapters and 3 in a thousand.
But here's a reminder, pronouns are my weakness and sometimes I can't notice such mistakes. My language doesn't have pronouns for genders so hope you understand.
Warning, incorrect spelling (but rare than legendary swords). I must let you know that my language doesn't have hard spellings as our words are spelled by how we speak them.
Anyway, thank you for visiting and reading this review of mine.
Last warning... Awkward structure but not all are grammatically incorrect.
I don't know i still didn't read it but based on summary it seems like irregular of magic school which I like.so i am going this.i hope it satisfies my expectations
Hey, shameless self reviev,
The book is great, read it.
The story follows Captain Jack, his daughter Maya and their crew on the long and oftentimes difficult journey through the void.
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Story is highly enjoyable and exactly the kind of cultivation novel I usually enjoy. But I cant give it a high score due to the translation quality dropping immensely after the first 40 free chapters. Once the novel went premium the translation quality pretty much became mtl level.
I adore this writing and the character development is great. I get anxious when I've finished the published work and have to wait for the next chapter!
So it tool me a minute, but there isn't much for me to critique on the story per say. I will praise the world building in this world. I am a fan of it as well as the power system in this story. I am highly optimistic for the future clashes using the system and the type of challenges that our ML faces.
This book is awesomeI have been following it for a long time, and it keeps getting better and betterIt feels like a eal book, not a web novel and it has very good character developmentNanakawaichan is my favourite author and all her books are aweaome
Why did you people vote for this book that there are a bunch of them already.
The first time I read the synopsis, I was immediately attracted to this novel. Personally, I'm not too interested in the other series because of the concept of the system and also the character development which is quite emotional. but I see a new light in this novel. I hope this novel will be better than the previous series.
As a writer, I recommend this story. I hope readers will like the story I wrote wholeheartedly. Give an honest assessment. Thank you for following this story.
I advise you to read this story once later you'll keep coming to read next chapter .author put details in a good way and story plot is also interesting .