I really like the story so far. It Progresses at a nice pace. Neither too fast nor slow. Keep up the Good Work!.
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The synopsis needs to be updated to help you get more readers.
The narration needs a little more polishing and you would be there. The plotline is cool. I am looking forward to this project.
I enjoyed the first part of this novel (only 60 chapters released at time of review) and I really like the concept of spirit bodies of different types, it’s a great progression from golems or elementals that an MC could control. Hope this gets picked up for co tinted translation as it has potetail and is a fun read
FYI: This novel's original translator is YamirMoon from Reincarnation Palace, where they release 5-8 chapters a week (I think, at least that's what their schedule says). If you'd like to support the translator, please do check out their website.
The original novel is a Chinese novel published on Qidian called 万界之从巨蟒开始 (lit. Ten Thousand Worlds Start From Giant Python), by 香蕉气吁吁 (Banana Panting)
As of the writing of this review (1/11/2021), there are 446 translated chapters on the translator's website, and the original novel on Qidian has concluded at 649 chapters.
In the words of the Chinese author: This book will have no shape-changing, no evolving into dragons or flood dragons, only evolving into mythical snakes, no harem, no eating humans, and will flow like a slice-of-life. (本书不化形，不化龙也不化蛟，只会变化成神话中的蛇，不开后宫，不吃人，走的是轻松日常流)
OK, actual review:
The novel itself starts with the MC being reincarnated as a humble little snake in an alternate world very similar to earth called the Blue Planet (only changes seem to be some country names and the habitats of some animals at first.)
As MC grows larger and stronger, becoming an actual mythological snake, the world goes through progressively more sci-fi developments, evolving into a full-on kaiju novel at around chapter 200, which eventually develops into wormholes and interstellar, etc.
MC doesn't have many character interactions, but the author recycles characters in a fun way, so you'll see some characters again after tens to hundreds of chapters.
Like the Chinese author said, it's a pretty light read without many heavy elements. Slightly repetitive, since MC just grows in power hoping to reach his goal, but you'll see fun things on the way.
It's good binge material, especially since it's so long.
now that i have become addicted to the novel, i will have to wait for the release ... sad the life of a reader waiting for the author to release chapters .... sigh.
The novel is incredible with good potency, but I hope the author is not discouraged as many do
I'm giving myself 5 stars because everyone does it :P
I'm not an expert on writing stories however I think I improve with every chapter I do.
Not sure tho.
This book is something else. The universe is extremely well constructed and I can see how it'll turn into an elaborate series. The main character is interesting, despite being a bit overpowered from the start. I'm really curious to see more of it!
good early chaps thru char building et world building but as you keep on reading there will be to many back stories and side stories etc. you'll easily get bored and confused. just skim reading and jumping chaps. there's no kingdom building at all! read till chap 77. boriing
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broooo the storyline seems really cool and interesting but the writing style just doesn't work out for me at least. Plus about proving to Sam's fam he could have just shown the contract and surely even he could have understood that flauting his position in the guild could improve Sam and Chad's standing plus the ""how magical"" and "how troublesome" bit would have been funny if used less. Rn they just came off as irritating
System/game stories are not my thing but this was pretty good! Sage is a very relatable character that the audience can easily sympathize with. I like how the author describes actions in this story.
The part I didn't like was when the author would put text in [* I don't mind sound effects or noises being written like that but sometimes the author would write stuff like [*busy*]. It doesn't make sense to me and there were also a few grammatical issues.
However, the rest of the story was pretty good!