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Love it lol
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Personaly i believe that ‘GINKEN’ is a very good and captivating novel and noticing that the author Timothy Is from Slovenia where their mother tongue isnt english i believe his use and knowledge Of language skills and literacy skills are quite remarkable!
The story progression is also very well thought out, Noticing the very small detail that Timothy reads the Notes left by other readers to help improve his work is very nice to know and im happy to keep on reading and i hope to see this novel go somewhere big one day
i absolutly love this novel!!!!
one of my all time favorite mc, great story, great interactions with other characters and really interesting side characters!
I need more chapters ASAP
From synopsis i can tell that this is using the same concept as My Disciples Are All Villains. The only difference is maybe this is harem...
So far this book is great! I love the character design and the way he thinks. It is a great thing to relate to a main character and really brings you into their world. Evan though might be a bit of an issue with how sheltered he is but he is still young.
I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.
Sometimes I think it is not necessarily to read a lot of books, their level can be improved, really improve their own attitude to technology, many times learning is not technology, but a kind of their own ideas, when they can not even master the inner thoughts, it is simply not to talk about improving.
Well, I will now talk about the book's perception, the difficulty of integrating network literature into mainstream literature, lies in the absence of literary critics, lies in the confusion of measurement standards, for a long time, literary critics of network literature collective aphasia, until the last year or two, many critics active in the field of literary criticism, only began to establish the evaluation system of network literature, it is rare that they quickly grasp the It is rare that they quickly grasp the charming kernel of network literature, and give high evaluation and high hopes to network literature. With the establishment of the theoretical system of network literature and the continuous improvement of network literature in terms of creative standards, it is clear that network literature has become the mainstream of mainstream literature, and we look forward to seeing more works of network literature selected.
Well, what can I say about this. I thought (like most of us would I'm sure) that the author would butcher such a delicate genre of exp. However with each new sentence and every page turn I felt more and more immersed! The delicacy of the capitalisation on the "E" and the beautiful almost curvaceous "x" topped off with an upright unfaultable "p" really brought this particular story to a climax for me, the twist in the middle when we learn that *spoiler* "e" had actually loved "p" and not "x" all along *spoiler* made my blood boil with excitement! I couldn't wait to see what x would do... Get revenge? Or be the bigger person (or letter in this case). Please give me the last chapters I cannot bear to see such a masterpiece go to waste, I am so excited to see if x will turn to the dark side. Thank you.
ok I wish you luck, I hope you do not release this novel because it looks cloudy..........................................................................
