I love your writing style and the english is well written!!!
I can see that this story is going to be even more interesting!
Keep it up writer
Nice story. I'm really getting addicted. Need more chapters
it's a nice fan faction story about migrating into a world with knowledge from old world but the jokes are corny not very funny, example a girl has ice powers, so he asks her can you sing let it snow from Frozen, it comes off like dad jokes so kills the story.
Ok I'm confused is this mc brain dead or he's to arrogant he claims to read novels in his past life but this is the dumbest he's been I mean what mc have acted like this well his personality needs a little work I mean he has two lighting in him but I don't remember a system or artifact a artifact would be a good twist well thank you for for the good work
Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author
I found this story very interesting, it reminds me of how I lived going to the library looking for a book to read, but then I met the novels and webnovels, I fell madly in love.
When did I leave the chapters? I also want to know the time zone, because I get lost with the time difference.
The story line is unique in it own way, I must appreciate the Author on this nice piece of his. I'm also hoping that we get more chapters, I so like the story and the characters too.
TLDR: AMAZING, must read. Hope it stays this good.
As mentioned previously by a different reviewer; a plant MC and Kingdom building is definitely a huge win. Not to mention the uniqueness of the story, even if not all that different from other system novels, makes it a great read. Although there are only 22 chapters, at the time of this review, and not enough time has passed for us to learn about the world background or new chapter speed, this is definitely going to become one of my favorite novels.
The only cons of the story, so far, would have to be the occasional grammar mishap or the brain f**k when the author mixes a few words up.
10/10
The major flaw in this type of work is the same: social isolation. Humans were made to grow in society, a forum is not a substitute for that. Do you want to make this story interesting? Make the MC start to wonder if the forum really is real people, nothing: - I have a system to be jealous of. Make MC want to use the system trying to escape. The essence of this story should be a prison break, not instagram competition.
I would not call it a review .yeah this is actually good one written by devil. But my question is to devil or the author is that will it somehow wend with the ppod or konrad coming into the scene ? Meaning is it going to be related to the previous one later?
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
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