Caden_Allen
Just read the first 10 chapters and I must say the novel is very good. The story is similar to ORV yet different at the same time. Can't wait to see how the story will progress.
pretty interesting start right off the bat.
The protagonist, Touma, is already really strong, and there's no time wasted jumping into the action. I would like to know how he got to this level in the first place, but ill guess ill see that later.
the overseers are pretty cool, wanna see more of them too
I had so much expectations,but I'm dying here author, sooo good novel but u have to make mc an eunuch, so please use your right hand more and stop writing what u will never feel.
MC is just completely oblivious. Story is filled with stuff like "little did the MC know, his body was being purified" and "the MC got another martial arts manual, but he doesn't know how to use them". Is some basic knowledge about the setting too much to ask for from a MC?
Thank god ISSTH completed before this sh***y war between QI and ww , still i am reading novels from both sites, chinese authors are great creators of imaginative world. If QI going to monopolise all the chinese novels and then putting paypal for reading novels, then i have to stop this amazing journey in chinese novels because i cant afford it. But i hope this doesn't happen.....
the storyline was eye catching and the grammar was good
and most important was each chapter was extremely long... which sometimes makes me lazy to read but a great novel
good, but need more harem
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raw pls ..........................................................................................................................................................
To start off I don't dislike your story, on the contrary, i think it's pretty good. I applaud you for your good grammar and sentence structure. Now my biggest disappointment with this story has to be the characters in the way that they affect the story. To start off none of the characters act like they're in an apocalyptic situation. all of them seem to be very unbothered by the peril they are in, they act like the apocalypse is just another Tuesday. And with the addition of annoying characters like courtney and that other thot, the story becomes less about the apocalypse and more of a highschool drama.
This novel is amazing there’s a balance between the sexual and normal content, the grammar has no problems, but the storyline needs improving, over all an brilliant story
I just found your story. I am liking it very much. You are taking your time and have not fallen into the trap that many people fall into when writing in this genre. I am eagerly looking forward to more chapters. Please keep writing
