The shameless pervert is honest.The writing quality is a 3.5/5 for me. The author uses “my” when “mine” should be used. “She is mine” or “she will be mine” not “she is my.” The sentences sometimes are missing words and definite/indefinite articles.There’s a steady updating, so 5/5!The story creeps up like a man in yobai but premature *ahem* ruins it sometimes. 4/5, the immaturity and virgin part is essential to the story, but it’s not my cup of tea.3.5/5 for characters as I don’t understand how his perversions are indulged by other characters, but then again, what do I know?3/5 for world building. It’s pretty generic to me, but if you think otherwise, write your own d*mn review!
GOOD STORY BUT GOTTA DROP.HIASHHH I CANT WATCH MC PLAY LIKE A HUMAN MOREOVER IT IS A GAME SO IT KINDA KILLS THE THRILL KNOWINGT THAT IT IS A GAME.BUT STILL GOOD ONE THOUGH KEEPING DRAGON CHARACTERISTIC WITH CURSES LOVE THAT ONE.BUT I STILL CANT.I MEAN HE IS PLAYING HUMANNNNNNN
does not do justice to original novel, translations are all over the place, and is very abrupt. takes a while to actually understand what’s going on, but once you finally understand the story, it’s not bad.
Overall, it's mediocre. I, personally do not like it. It's not because it's bad or anything, but almost everything so far has been cliche within webnovel, and it ruins it. It'd been alright if you had just started it off *without* the rebirth. Honestly, that would've been far better.
I just want this to be realeased because the story is amazingXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOXOXOOXXOXOXO
I hope the author returns. It's a great concept. It's a great novel. A novel that will make you forget reality and get lost in it. My only complaint is that the romance sucks. I was expecting more specific approaches but it was very superficial. And hopefully no more drama. Because I want the main character to have fun playing this game.
Anyone who wants to help can comment in the latest chapter, or here, we need editors to improve chapter grammar, who has time to talk to me, I'm sure it will be much better to read with editing, remembering that the best stories here at Webnovel there are always editors to help.https://discord.gg/UVnyMfa
MC is really relatable, he is smart, humble, hardworking and is not a pervert who can't keep his hands to himself. He is realistic in his approach to cultivation and the world in general and romance is pretty good so far (ch 60) and elder jing doosn't fall for him immediately and she tell's him his shortcomings and can be ruthless to him if he is being stupid which i like about this novel because she is not being a burden to him but helping him understand the ruthless world of cultivation so he can be cautious.
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This is an absolute trash novel. Whoever wrote it doesn't deserve a mellow criticism but needs a good bashing. Overused plot, stupid mc and all the usual Chinese unsmart tropes.
lets keep it short, as this novel does not deserve any longer review. first reincarnation or two were quite enteresting, but it goes downhill. interesting idea wasted by unbelievable world, no real character development and no really interesting plot.