"what the hell is going on?"
Feng Ji was still concerned, as the sparrow was assuming that Gao Lan Mei was talking about the body her soul was occupying.
I heard Mama and Papa gasp and quickly looked back towards the box, a pair of beautiful furry, white snow boots where resting in the red velvet interior. But there was just one problem... why would I need snow boots? It hasn't snowed here once since I've been here, well I haven't really taken an interest in the outside till now but, why of all times give them to me now? It's not snowing now, so is it coming close to that time of the year when it does?
She had sensed that someone is watching from afar, however, she can't locate it, however, with the help of detection earlier, the aura that had locked on her earlier had led her to the direction where it originates!
"Jackpot!" Finn rubbed his hands eagerly. Checking the chests quickly, he was disappointed that the first one only contained clothes. Mostly black robes, socks and undergarments, but also a couple 'normal' outfits that upper-middle class women would wear when out shopping.
Her hairstyle was still the one of a maiden. It was only a half high-knot without any complicated twists but the delicate head ornaments were dazzling. A yellowish pearl formed the heart of a five petal flower; the petals were made of pink jade and the flower's body of green jade. There were eleven of such nail-sized flowers and one was of the size of a baby fist. The biggest one was clung into her high-knot while the little ones were arranged in three lines at each side of the biggest flower, forming the illusion of being the leaves of the flower's body; seven little flowers formed a bigger leaf to the left side and four a smaller one to the right.
To be honest I'm only writing this review, that is likely to be lost in the sea of other reviews, because I don't see a lot of people actually reviewing the book. It was either people just going off on a tangent, labeling the their most frustrating scenes in the book, using a myriad of offensive words to describe it, or Just plain old white Knighting. There is also a large block of text dedicated to fans that are enjoying the book, which to be honest is pretty nice. At least I don't have to deal with a copiously long toxic comment with no constructive criticism to be seen. It also shows that a large portion of the community has some patience.Now (disclaimer!!!!!), I never really made it past the first 50 reviews. There are too many to read.Second (Disclaimer!!!), If someone is still reading this don't expect anything great I'm not a professional book reviewer.So to start off, this is a pretty interesting concept. Fairly original, and carves out it's own place in the reincarnation genre's inanimate object corner.The story "itself" is also well thought out. however the protrayel of the story isn't the "greatest". let me tell what I mean by that... The writer has this habit of telling and not showing. For the people who are not aware of what that means, I will describe it in a different way. When painting or drawing a picture for someone to see you usually flesh the image out give the picture depth and meaning in every stroke of the brush. I do not mean literally, like every square centimetre of paint has some kind of mystical meaning. It has meaning in the terms of portraying the depth of a video whilst it still being a still image. For example: shading, perspective, minute detail like pores on the skin or individual leaves on a tree. It gives the picture life. There is quite a bit of similarity between a painting and a book, in that they both try to describe a living scene, an entire world, on a still canvas.I'm sorry if my description still didn't help.? The point is the there is visible depth when you show, which isn't an effect you get when you tell. Telling is literally encapsulating the entirety of the scene in a couple of descriptive, but limited words. To show, is to describe the nuances of the scene, give the skeleton of the story flesh, describe what the author themselves see, to paint the picture in the readers' mind. As a writer you don't have to do this too often, you actually shouldn't. It's a device used when trying to really bring to life an important scene. However there is a difference between just right and too little.The entirety of that block of probably unnecessary text is me just saying the author's writing itself lacks depth. Not the story, just the writing. I think this is my last point. This is just my opinion on this one but, I feel like there is too much info dump, or the info dump is just not spaced out well enough, or the info dump just doesn't have any life. The last one might be on purpose seeing as it is just the characters grinding skills. Either way the writing isn't particularly well paced when around 60%(Not an exact meausrement) of 4+ chapters (Also not an exact measurement) straight is dedicated to an info dump. ? But again this easily remedied if you just give the info dump more meaning and life, I think... ?But who Am I to judge, I could just be spouting nonsense... Which makes this an immense waste of a morning that could have been spent watching Gawr Gura read Konosuba.Ah whatever, I enjoy the world the Author is trying to portray and I hope they continue to evolve the writing and the story.
-Parry 2/5
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Months after months pass as they defend, when they thought it was finally going to be over, a giant gorilla over 10 feet crashed through the defense and began killing the best warriors.
I really love this story. I started it last night & read 70 chapters !! after that though the next chapters have "chapter 71 13" for example and it is an earlier chapter with other characters mixed into the sentences. I think to prevent theft? does this app really have this novel's authors permission to be disseminated? I hate to think that I spent so many coins to support this story and author; to be deceived.
"Well, I heard there's a Legendary Boss at the Swamplands. The team who finds it first will have a good reward from our Guild Hall's Treasury. The first who lands the last hit would get the soul, of course." I explained.