Ok, so here I am writing another review for another novel. So let's begin it.
Writing quality - good detailed descriptions which make everything seem lively and minimum mistakes too.
Story development - at a good pace with enough mysteriousness to make me want to read another chapter. Though it can be a little confusing at first, but once you get over that, it's just plain wonderful.
Character design - what to say about this. One word, mysterious, is all I require to describe the characters. They hide secrets and have cunning minds. So yeah, they are not like a Chinese novel MC who face slaps a person 10 times before actually hitting them.
Updating stability - as a fellow author, I won't pressure you on this. No matter how many chapters you upload, as long as they are good, everyone will read them.
World background - the earth here is completely different from the earth we knew and the author has a unique way of describing everything in detail while keeping it interesting. Good job.
Overall - Love your work author! I hope you don't drop it and continue writing the novel with cliffhangers and more mystery.
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.
i don't mean to stress you author as i know you have a life and other things to do but pretty please can you update the novel...it's been like a month and I've already read all the chapters till the last and there's been no update. Like your practically killing me here... please update for this reader
Very good book, it's very cool and interesting. will read more once I get my free time. Really recommend it for people to read (⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)
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I love this book, world background, quality....its just fantastic
kinda nice.. the author put in a lot of schemes/mysteries in it, at times it even felt a bit unnecessary and forceful.. other than that it was a good read
Loved this book! I am willing to spend fp(1) to unlock this book but plz 2x the production! the maid make her op too! and you can change the fate of small characters, make sure he is always hunting treasures, moving forward, it plateaued twice(bad!) 5star for 2x prod. req.
Interesting world and premise, relatable characters and good world building, and steady updates, a nice book overall and deserving of a five star review, keep up the good work.
Want some more i think you got a great start of the story, you could ad some bad luck to the mc so that he get some change, in his go lucky attitud to his powers.
This **** is going tf down I promise u. Cant wait to see wats up next for him. Is his spirit going to form a few more heads like the ones in the past
Nice story and over powered characters , looks we can look forward for so much story plot with action. Good Mix and Great work Author, Loved it