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What i am about to write... doesn't necessarily mean i say its bad ar something just that it hurts my head a little...you should read the novel regardless and form your opinion..as i am sure that it's rating maybe isn't only for show and my opinion might even be wrong and i am missing something...
Now Then
Man... anything just doesn't make sense to me ..in this novel...
Mc was supposed to lose humanity..or something but actually other than race change there were no side effects..
he is just a typical mc..
is he some hero of justice ??? ,he helps everyone he sees bullied...and shit like that..?? i wouldn't have any problem with these settings if the mc wasn't shown to be like a broken guy...also that the author created such a drama about him losing humanity
...He ate the DEVIL'S FRUIT surely other than race change (that too only in name..) there must be some side effects.. Right???
NO.. Nothing ... sigh*
Also....dude just how many skills,classes and abilities are there?? everyone's stats and mana also over 1000000s..like you can't even remember all of the skills and abilities...and other things
(DON'T BLAME MY LOW IQ...ok... just don't.... its definitely not my problem..no jokes*)
Many times you won't even know where the fight is happening...cuz mc and his new poke...i mean partner fight in an inn..that too a low class inn ..lot of cliches too..well that's not the main problem as they don't go far beyond by brain capacity
many stupid things...like the mc wastes his time during the fight ice guy where he could gave died if ice guys sister interviened and his sister didn't even kill the mc...who i am sure will be a future problem for her...typical
The joseph guy..could have caught the mc but didn't even chase..i mean ok he might have thought that the opposite party is only hostile to others not him... should atleast have captured him..or tried...( I don't think tht the mc could have escaped..due to a power level difference of what..over 900..cough* cough* i mean over 500+...levels?
The Mc looks for slaves..which i thought he did because he can't trust any one but Noooo...he just freed them..to gain their TRUST
He should have learned that he cannot trust others...cuz he got ditches by the king..and all....but no..
His.. childhood friend...well just forget her
Ohhh Right....he has a system...which probably everyone forgot by now atleast i only remembered during writing ( AGAIN DON'T QUESTION MY IQ)....theres a lot but my head will...blast
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This is really a different type of story. No cruel step-parent, no scheming sister/best friend stealing boyfriend/fiancé. She wasn't murdered. The FL has a true best friend, a loving mom, doting brother and nothing is mentioned about the missing father. No hidden love suddenly discovered upon death.Weird, right? Other than her being reborn and wanting to inprove her life, I don't see any sort of drama. Yet. But there are hints.Such as a mental cultivation technique that she gets, a mystery about her father, and possibly the ML has been introduced. I suspect things will pick up in later chapters. For now, things are slow. Not enough to truly captivate you or repel you either.
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bruh.. belive me or not this is really a legit hidden gem. I have to say the suspense is ? .. I literally wait for the new chapters... really hope it doesn't get dropped midway
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
Just few chapters and already addicted. The universe is so deep that you can’t help but drown into.I like the characters building and the easy way the writing style brings us this magic/necromancy/alchemist references
So far good enough. A big world filled with many characters. For the first few chapters, the story stretches around for a bit and there was a bit of confusion but, the author managed to plug those plotholes so far. The writing quality needs some improvement but overall interesting plot.
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