The novel was good till the author started eating his **** and ****ed up the novel. Misunderstandings that really are fucking annoying and impossible t o happen, the author just stretch for useless drama.
Just letting everyone know before hand, the main character IS gender bent. Not just a trap, he plays as a FEMALE character. Not that that is bad, just a warning to let you know. It's not my cup of tea because of that and the writing is about average but, it's your call and I'm sure that there are many people that will love this story. Good luck, Author-san and I hope that your story is loved by many!
I liked the whole thing. The way Jessica was friend from past felt forced but overall it was a good plot so far. I liked the pace not too fast or to slow on movie making and all extra stuff was not in excess or too little either overall 4+ it goes down cos of stability of updates since its not picked there is no updates yet only 60 trial reads!!! rest are 4-5 starts.
Translation Quality: PoorThe translator+'editor' combo can't even capitalize the names of players. On top of that, there are tons of notes either from author or translator mentioning stupid things such as: a quarter of an hour is equal to 15 minutes, 2nd tier is one tier less than 3rd tier, etc.. These things should be removed.Story Development: PoorI've read over 30 chapters in, and literally less than 45 minutes passed since he had entered into the game. Yes, I spent probably 2-4 times the amount of time reading 30 chapters than the minutes that passed by in-game.Here's a breakdown of how the story goes:2% plot8% comments made by MC saying "as I expected" or "as I predicted"30% reactions by the audience10% beta testers wondering how MC did XX thing, even though there's only one possible answer30% info dump and explanations of things20% repetition of the same explanation in twenty different waysCharacter Design: PoorThe only thing this MC knows how to say is "as I expected, ..." and "as I predicted, ..." He's supposedly some god-tier top 100 player, but in the beginning gets surprised by a level 5 city guard using a basic skill after being attacked. There are so many issues with the character design that it's too much effort to list them out.As for other characters go, the sister didn't seem to have too bad of a set-up, but I haven't read far enough to see whether the author will mess up her design or not.World Background: Average+Look, this is a stereotypical VRMMO reincarnation story. Essentially, just imagine ROTSSG with some elements changed. While there are quite a few ignorant and wrong statements made regarding the IRL world by the narrator, you just have to accept that most Chinese web novel authors have intelligence deficiency.I'm a fan of this genre so if there were more chapters I'd probably continue to drudge through this novel and keep nitpicking on it every few paragraphs (I felt like I wrote at least 5-6 comments per chapter.. new record).↓↓↓tl;dr: This novel is trash. The only thing you'll get out of it is being annoyed about how slow the pacing is, and the endless info dumps. Seriously, you'd think they would end by chapter 10 or 15! Nope, this author has managed a new record, info dumping for 32 chapters straight. I'm going to go out on a (very short) limb here and say that they will continue doing so for the next few hundred chapters. This is very clearly their writing 'style,' if it can be called that.
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I love the way the story is developing but it is abit slow and to make matters worse the story is updated with chapters every 24hrs it's too small at least an increase of 1more chapter daily will be appreciated pending our wait for mass release