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I love this book and would like to recommend this book to everyone. First the author has a good writing quality, it's unique, the plot is also wonderful. So i am telling everyone to checj this out and you won't be disappointed! I am awaiting your update, Author...really loved your book
I really like this novel it’s almost a completely original idea and it really opens the mind to a new perspective I highly recommend this to those who need a interesting read
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First of all, the title "The Trap Called Equality" really caught my attention. Since there's only a few chapters so far I'm not sure about future stability of updates, but so far its a full five :) The grammar and spelling could be proof-read but overall, it's a pretty nice plot. Good luck and great job!
nice novel. I wish the author didn't make the novel for a fee :D................................................................................
*Remember: this review is based on the first five chapters.*
Constructive Criticism: I'd suggest that with your constant scene changes you make sure that when the focus character changes, that you state who the focus character is... I got a little confused with the only thing to go on being the time the events were taking place.;,;.
Positive Feedback: You seem like some sort of professional writer with the quality of the plot, character build, and background. Also, your grammar and structure are well done.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I did as promised and read this novel to review it. I'm sorry but the story holds no interest to me so I'm discontinuing it here... Keep up the effort and satisfy the fans you have the best you can.;,;.
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I love paranormal books. I cant help myself. I hope you write more chapters so that I can catch up on my fav Kione. He makes me laugh. I cant explain why or how but all his statements are blunt and funny.
Looking forward to reading more from you. Cheers.
I really love how the author describes whats happening in the story,it's not too long or to short. I also like how the author doesn't take his time to get to the point, The story makes it worthy for me to read more chapters.
I kind of like it...The story, detail, powers, world building and immersion are all great. The only and main problem is the mc. He seems to have a hero complex which greatly takes away from the immersion of the story. It's also strange how he questioned himself for having feelings for his father who he called a stranger because he was from a different world and didn't know that person but not for strangers from a village full of people he definitely didn't know but still risked his life for. I can't help but fear that his need to help and save people will slow him down, bring about extra baggage, danger and unnecessary forced plots.
Very basic beginning, but that's fine. What isn't is the Gary Sue MC who has no emotional baggage despite being traumatized at 12, constantly bullied, and oh, trains with no goal or motivation, not even sadness or to escape from his predicament. You know the guy who at 15 looks all muscular because his parent casually mentioned excercise once, the guy who never hurts anyone because "good guy is lawful good, not hormonal teenager," and of course, is always upbeat.
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