The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.
Baited by the synopsis, actually bad, and from what I can tell, is actually a fan fiction.
Finally! You did a rewrite of Zenith! I hope its better and more amazing than the other already amazing novel! Good work and good luck!! Cant wait to read the .ew changes.
Just the name Er Gen guarantees a certain level of quality at the very least let alone when you have absolute word garbage that shouldn't be called novels as competition.
Novel is terrible all of sudden 26 chapters of same **** over and over wow I skipped atleast 20 chaptersstoryisstill in same place . So I officially have dropped this garbage
I picked up this novel for one reason and that was Kingdom building tag. I have read over 100+ chapters and I am yet to see any type of Kingdom building initiative done by the MC. I understand that it takes time but this novel seems like more of an action adventure revenge novel where MC does levelling up and cultivation inside a to get stronger to get revenge. the overall writing is not bad but I feel that every 5 chapters there is some new skill while we don't even get to understand more about existing skills. World building can be bit confusing at times due to lack of clarity. I am thinking of dropping this novel as it doesn't seem like there will be any Kingdom building done in next 500-600 chapters as the MC has yet to even start making a guild. His past trauma is making him hesitant to form new friendships and he seems adamant to do everything on his own. Of course that might change in future with character development but as of now this novel isn't about Kingdom building but more of a journey of a guy who is seeking vengeance and revenge while doing self harm in the process just to achieve the end result. Please remove the Kingdom building tag so others like me who wanted to read a decent Kingdom Building novel don't get mislead.
Hi guys editors translators and webnovel! i will write 2 part of review of this novel and 3 others: in this part i most say that the title of the novel is all wrong: "Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives: Am I A Blacksmith?"
is not correct. he may be a kind of a Blacksmith, but they are not his Wives, they are more as companions, that want to protect him and maybe feel affection to him because he created them all, maybe a herm can work a bit here, and i have this strong feeling that he will also fight alone or together with them himself and not use their protection at the beginning. their protection is only in the beginning, later on he will kill himself and get stronger himself, the novel is one of the best in the past few months, and give us surprises again and again, and Xiao Shui will be his first antagonist, and later on we will see more powerful antagonists,
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Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.
Well this my second novel on this site , and I shamelessly give it a five stars.
Gamer’s Godship Gamer’s Godship. Gamer’s Godship. Gamer’s Godship.Gamer’s Godship
Purple Lightning Emperor Purple Lightning Emperor. Purple Lightning Emperor. Purple Lightning Emperor.
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Your book is really amazing, I enjoy it a lot. I'm a big fan of villain MCS especially real villain MCS with a brain and reason. One of my favorite books is warlock of the magus world and revenant insanity and this mc has the potential to be another. Keep up the good work author, I really love this book dont give it up.