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Excellent grammar, fun plot and vivid descriptions. I think this is a very well written novel! If you're thinking of whether or not you wana try and read this book, the answer is GO FOR IT!!
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I love the fluidity of the writing and how the world is described. I'm able to keep up and it doesn't feel overwhelming at all. The characters are really well displayed too!!
This novel is very very good... aside from the first 5 chapters. it states that the mc did some messed up things, like cucking his brother, but were never given any description of it and its only briefly mentioned in one sentence. If you can get through the first 5 chapters, this book is definitely worth the read.
don't get your hopes up the first chapter is clickbait. waste of time. clowns????????????????????????????????????
it's really good, u just need to correct a lot of grammatical errors in your book and I really love the premise, it's pretty original........
Hm, although it is wish fulfillment which has been quite saturated across the board recently. The saturation is 99% terrible novels, either by plot or writing quality. Although, this follows a fairly cliche idea the writing is generally pretty good. For that reason I give it a good review, also there is a lack of modern setting wish fulfillment novels, particularly well written one, based on simple grammar alone. So Good job author.
Wow, it's the rare occasion where I give a trial novel over 4 stars.The writing quality is good with some translation hijinks. Most impressive is the focus on unique characters and character development. The stereotypical tropes are there, but the author doesn't write into a trap of cliches. There are actually interesting twists. World background is weaker and is mostly developed through the actions of the characters. Just imagine Tang dynasty China, I suppose.It's too early to see where the story goes, and I can see the story just becoming a repetition of the same setup, but I have hope in the author.
Is it your original or a translated work if yes from where did you find this novel. Anyway, the story is intriguing and keeps you hooked up.◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎◎
here from mobpsyco tv's suggestions ,hope this novel doesn't dissapoiNT......................................................ITADAKIMASU?