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Amazing poetry, deep thinking... amazing. Although I was a little lost at first, I found my way back a few chapters later. Still, it's something I would not be able to put together. Keep it up!
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It's okay novel, I enjoyed a evening of reading this. It'd unfortunate that it only have this much chapter. I would wait till the novel is completed and read it in one go. Great work.
We've got here a story that involves our MC going from weak to strong. Like the author had said and is acknowledging in his comment, the grammar part is still a bit off, but it's nothing really noticeable. As on WN you need to update constantly, it's common for us, authors, to make a few mistakes, here and there.
The premise of the story sounds interesting, and I do love that the author uses the prologue to present to us exactly what kind of world is the MC going to be into.
Great job!
the beginning of the story is quite interesting but the longer you read it turns into a MC novel who is very easily offended, he kills here and there without thinking, just because he has the inheritance of a demon god.
This is what a call a perfect villain ✨?From the start he is rich, powerful and not stupid besides He is the MC of this novel , So what would I say : is he the villain or a the MC ???????
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plotline is good and interesting, but i believe you should remove 18+ tag from synopsis, there is nothing 18+ in the novel.
This has to be one of the stalest novels I have read. The characters made no sense, story makes no sense, the mc make no sense. It’s like someone decided to put a bunch of genre together, hoping for something great. This sucks
WARNING: Reading this story might make your little brother grow 2 inches longer. Read it at your own risk.
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EXTREMELY SEXUAL
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Don't read this in public places
from the first twenty chapters, it clear that not much planning went into writing this. the MC gets a second chance goes three years back in time. he was a professional gamer yet he is rattled by the death of an npc, which doesn't make sense. there is no mention of using his future knowledge to gain an advantage. there isn't much depth to characters yet. his reincarnation is brushed past and the MC doesn't react much to it. not much world building and background to speak of. on the other hand, the translation quality is great and the writing is very fluid.
all in all, a somewhat generic but fun read for when you have nothing to do.