So this story is very cool the premise is cool and the writing is good hence the score. But to balance that i'm going to tell you the only thing wrong with the story in my opinion.
Everytime the author introduces anything or anyone in this world they give a 2 to 4 paragraph highschool essay about who that person is or what that object is the history of it ect.. I know your thinking thats not bad as it gives more background to the story but it's not always fictional things. Its real life things or real people that actually exist. Things that if we cared we could look up or things that we might already know. So this make the story needlessly long winded. like it's being padded for chapters just to make the story longer. everything else about the story is cool and very interesting but these unneeded long winded explanations slow the pace of the story so right after you get excited about something the MC is doing or is going to do. You get hit with a long explanation of how big a story The Hobbit is..... Like we don't know the hobbit is an amazing book that set up one of the greatest trilogies of books in history. This makes parts of the fanfic feel tedious and ruins fun or exciting parts of the fanfiction that could otherwise be enjoyed.
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WARNING: if you read this, your brain will turn into vegetables. This novel will make you puke and have diarrhea because it is just that bad.
Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,
This is it. This is probably one of the 3 big novels that truly got me into reading. It’s one of the few that I can actually re read easily(minus the time commitment) I remember reading it for hours and hours everyday on WXW. This and Swallowed Star are easily some of the best cultivation stories out there. From the depth of the characters to the fact that not every other chap is a tournament arc, there are myriad reasons to love this novel. Please give it all the love as well as I Eat Tomatoes, so we can get more great stuff like this.
2 chapters for week? God. Come on qidian. Please get someone to help the translator.
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good book so far on chapter 117 but to much padding to explain a simple items takes like 3 chapters. also the mc likes to forget some important stuff.
I was really liking the story but I gets downhill very fast after chapter 40. Around chapter 70, author added a forced "face slapping scene" of 5 chapter long. Like why? The most interesting part of the story is the origin expanse. But Author is spending less time on it.
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Wanted to review after reading the free chapters.
The story is alright, and the potential for development of both the world and characters is good.
I’m curious though, why does the system stop appearing after a while, it would be good to show the status every once in a while, its a bit difficult to keep up with the info otherwise, it is also a good way to let the readers track the progress of the character.
Ima bad before the good kinda guy so here it goes ✌️
The only issues I have with this wonderful book are minor grammar mishaps. They’re not really confusing so it doesn’t take away from the story just ease of reading.
Good parts are literally everything else haha character develoyis pretty on point and the idea of the mc maintaining his “innocence” but still growing in value is a beautiful design
WTF... Why is a story that was dropped being picked up again??? And why the heck were we voting on it if it was a story that had been dropped and picked up again.