Waiting for more chapters........ I think this is your 1st try. That's so nice. all the best for your next chapters.very excited to read more novels of you
It's actually very interesting. There's a lot of concepts and ideas going around. I personally liked how they both cheated on each other than after a moment of pride, they confessed. I also really like the poem. You should do more of that. But please use paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to read. It looks disheartening, so probably a lot of people wouldn't give it a chance because of how gigantic the paragraphs look.
I think the review s are purchased because this is hard to follow and needs fast pass very early on in a better book I've seen people rage about that but not on this one.