Sadly I am but a broke child so I couldn't afford to go beyond chapater 56 however I still believe this was 100% worth the read! I'm not going to try to be technical since I know nothing about writing, I highly reccomend this novel
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I haven't read a story like this in sooo long!! lol I'm already hooked.
This is a paraphrased transcription of the novel:
Simp: DIE VILLAIN
Female Villain: I AM A GIRL SIMP!
Simp: Sorry m' lady, please continue to plot against me
FVillain: that's right simp, simp for me
Simp: DIE VILLAIN! ONE MORE SHOT TO KILL YOU
FVillain2: WAIT SIMP! THAT MAN BELONGS TO ME, SAVE HIM
Simp: YES M' Lady even though he tried to kill me i will save him
Girl1: Simp you are the strongest around here, protect me!
Simp: YES M LADY!!!!
Girl1: I am weak simp...what will you do
Simp: TAKE EVERYTHING M' LADY TAKE IT ALL I LOVE YOU
Girl1: Simp you are going west? I am going east
Simp: I WILL GO EAST MY LOVE
Since I can review myself, lol. Thanks for reading! Lemme just say some things. Try reading these before making criticism I suppose:
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The words and phrasings used, or things that happen aren’t mistakes. One of the tags of this book is mystery, so there are most likely no ‘accidental’ words or sentences; those are intentional. Same goes for ‘plot holes’; things that aren’t discussed or don’t come into play will probably be explored in later chapters/arcs. Also, I'm only human. So, errors can occur but I’ve triple checked from chapters 1-100 and everything should be fine. The errors would come from me updating daily, so I’ll probably fix them at a later date when I catch them but obviously I will try not to make them in the first place.
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Character decisions aren’t mistakes. This is what a character would say or do in a said situation. What you think might happen may very well differ from what I have in mind. It can mean the characters did or said something wrong, or didn't do the best possible thing; that’s the point. They’re built with flaws, goals, dreams, traits and their own experiences. Boo me, not my precious, precious characters.
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The pacing I have for this story I think fits perfectly with the story I want to tell. There are reasons for slow moments and reasons for fast ones. It does have actions scenes in it but this is not a fast-paced action novel. It's about the characters, their own developments, mysteries and their journey.
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If on the off chance you find any spelling errors or anything, comment on it, I'll fix it asap.
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And last but not least, please, please, please, have a wonderful day, stay hydrated and get enough sleep. Happy readings~
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Question for the author, are you English speaking and do you write raw in English or is it translated? Your reviews read very well but the actual synopsis and the novel read very poorly like a swiftly done translation, I admire your dedication and creativity regardless.
I saw that this novel didn't have any "real" Review so I'm making one to help you chose whether to read it or not
First of all I'm only at chapter 54 so I may make a new review later
Pros:
1-There will be 7 girl in the harem or something like that (it may be a con it depends on what you prefer)
2-The MC have a space and time affinity so he have space and time ability which are really badass (he can gain ability when he lvl up and can lvl up his ability)
3-the MC isn't completely stupid (but I wouldn't say that he is smart either)
4- the world has a lot of potential even though it isn't really original the author describes it well in my opinion but there is still a lot of mystery and things we don't know about the second world (even first world we only know about the district where the MC live but the world look really interesting)
5- the system is nicely done and the reason for the XP gain and lvl up is really good compared to other gamer system
6- he won't leave any of his woman behind and all the women will be important for the story (the author confirmed it himself)
7-no ****** (it can be a con for ****** lover lol)
8- there's only a few grammar mistake (I find the grammar above average compared to other work on this platform)
9-the MC become more ruthless later on (I suggest you to read till chapter 48 at least)
10-the R-18 chapter are great
Cons:
1-this is a harem (this can be a pro and con it depends on your preference)
2-till now (chapter 54)the MC's relationship with the girls isn't that deep (there's way more smut than romance so it may feel like the MC just **** a woman and directly go to the other but the author said that he will try to balance the romance, action and smut)
3-super mega duper incredibly strong plot armor (not in a fight but with the girls)
4-the MC isn't stupid but sometimes relie too much on the system in my opinion
5-no ****** (it can be a con for some ppl)
6- the MC can be somehow naive sometimes
7-cringe alert
So in my opinion I wouldn't say that this is a masterpiece cause the storie still have some flow and isn't that original but I still think that that's a great novel and a lot of ppl wouldn't regret spending their free pass and coin on it (I suggest you to read at least it chapter 48 cause I find chapter 43-48 the best so far there will be a lot of explanation and action)
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Was honestly very skeptical of the novel at first because I assumed it was a 'Everybody Else is a Returnee' clone. Was happy to find out that only the beginning of the novel is somewhat similar and the rest of the novel (so far) is quite different. Honestly this novel is very strange to me some times, the game elements almost seem randomly thrown in and out of place in this evolution style novel giving it a "broken world" feel (which makes sense as you read the novel). Most surprising thing about novel though is that it does actually deal with some emotional topics such as immortality, loneliness, death, companionship, etc. Very surprising for this kind of novel as you would expect most of it to be fighting and whatnot while actually a lot of it is about exploration and going though the motions of life. Anyways I recommend checking this novel out I quite like it.
oh boy...
this one's a case of where the packaging looks decent but you take a bite and you get a mouth full of sawdust...
In the first chapter it says he made a guild together with a friend who then later betrayed him in his first life. Not only does said friend never show up in the early chapters, the MC proceeds to narrate that he never joined a Guild in his last life a few chapters in.
Like hello? I know you just slapped a few cliches together and called it a novel but at least keep your facts straight jesus...
My favorite novel♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️.