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copy-paste of "The first order"... It's a bit sad to see people obviously copying other works... I mean, it's okay if the MC'S ability is the same, but there, the "author" copied even the personality of the characters, their bonds... it's a bit too much... This said, it's a copy of a great work, so it's good for those who didn't read the original.
Seems to be a different perspective than usual, but I personally love family novels, especially when it's not just the main characters point of view. These stories of families growing and becoming powerful together just always seem to appeal to me. Hopefully this gets picked.
love it PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP need more need more [img=update][img=update]
Sounded like a good idea but mc is stupid and trusted people He knew were hostile to him and lost his system . Then the novel went the basic loli assistant which just made me more annoyed. Then after complaining about being used in his human like the mc decides to help people who simply want to use him in this life.
Basically it’s A cool story as long as you don’t Mind averageness and an mc who continously dosnt care about getting stronger or protection and just about helping random people who seem disgusted by him.
I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!
plz make more chapters plz but no locks plz. hxludjfigotoglfi kfogkgkgitogifitigugiy8t9yououpupu9y8y7t8tiyoy8tigogigigut7tigigigiyiaprofororprpriridugr7rufigogpgofofifkfi
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amazing well built plot and world building that will draw you in.
Author is also so gente to provide readers a map in every chapter comment section, and it works wonderfully.
Lots of unique, funny, quirky characters, and I feel like a lot more has to be introduced yet.
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ALSO I'M ANSIOUSLY WAITING FOR WHEN HE FINALLY DO SOMETHING WITH THIA!
If you are used to these Webnovel novels and ignore somethings, this novel is actually good & interesting. Bear with some small illogical things & you may find it as a good read.(At 25th chapter when posted)
author here honestly I don't think my novel is that good but i think it's normal so check it out....
I have no expectations from Mad Snail after TDG. wellgl bois, get ready 2 get ur hopes sht on. .... How's everyone's day going. Ya'll good? Great me 2....
