Is this nice story?........... And why do i need to put 140 characters??????.............. God help this new daoist..........................
This book is absolutely amazing! The characters feel so alive, and believable! The mc's friends also compliment his character really well, and watching their playful banter is really funny!
a well written novel with many good power ups.
character of mc is what i believe to be chaotic good . he is not smart type but does things what needs to be done .
also he doesn't think with lower half .
good story and update rate so 5 star from me
Love alien tech so much and completely hooked with the story. Nice development, fast paced, understandable language and makes it very easy to read. Loving it so far and can't wait for more.
This is my my novel on sport genre. If there are any mistakes or concerns, please feel free to point them out. Thank you.
Just a shameless author doing shameless things. Don’t mind me.
The following passage contains nothing but the nonsensical rambling of a shameless author.
I’m not sure what you want y’all to do but I wanna see ya tomorrow night I’m going to go down to see y’all tomorrow I love
As we approach our 100th chapter, I'd like to share my review of the story so far. While I acknowledge that it may not be a perfect 5-star rating, I firmly believe that the story I aim to tell is worth the rating I've given it.
Admittedly, the progression can be a bit slow, and there are moments when the MC's actions may seem unintelligent or lazy.
However, I urge readers to stick with the story until at least the 50th chapter before making any final judgments and dropping hateful comments.
If, after giving it a fair chance until 50 chapters, the story still doesn't resonate with you... Then I can always see you in my next story.
If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to ask in the comments, and I'll do my best to address them.
Regarding some common criticisms from a few readers:
The MC may appear lazy or unproductive at times, but this is due to the lack of available resources that he can use at the current point in the plot. However, he gradually becomes more proactive as the story unfolds.
The MC is not a weak or pathetic (he does act like it in the start but don't be fooled), and I can only ask that you read further to see how his character develops.
The pacing of the story may be a bit slow in the beginning, (too much monologues) but it does pick up as the plot progresses.
There are some writing issues but other than that, its amazing. Definitely creative, havent seen something like this on WB before and will be adding it to my library
I just started reading this and i have a quick question. Does this novel have NTR or Yuri in it? I really dislike those genres since both seem like Cheating to me.
I am at Chapter 200 so just a quick question there is mention of the power system you introduced ( like Rookie,alpha,master, grandmaster ,legendary) could we expect it in the future
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this novel has no point to its existence. the beginning plot is rushed, and just outta nowhere he now has the search bar, next after the rape incident, vegetative state girlfriend and his grief and still present love for her the guy decides to take a drunk women home and have a wild night. its like he doesn't remember the rape crime he was set up for in a very similar scenario. the funny part is that its only ch.12 and tbe author already destroyed his own novels synopsis. really disappointing mc. i have no respect for the man anymore.