Snake_Empress, thank you for this amazing novel.
Keep up the good work.
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Did the novel change its title name?
Seems to be focusing a lot on romance and harem. A lot of drama, mysteries. Kinda chaotic.
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Great novel all I hope is for the author to post more chapters consistently and jest keep up the good work on the novel and don't drop the story
A good read. Try it.
For those who are not satisfied, here is a short review:
Special ability is OP, with the ability to see opportunities and dangers in a 100+m radius. Even future opportunities are visible, trough the same can not be said about dangers so far. In addition not all opportunities are simple or easy to get.
Story flow is very well done, very few "oh my God he is awesome" or "lets waste the readers time by having 5 random different people monologue about how awesome the MC is" moments, the few technical explanation passages are consistently short and Side-Characters which actually have a reason to be included.
MC is an interesting character with a few minor flaws and not the typical suicidal lemming who is only alive because of his plot armor.
World and Cultivation are logical and quite interesting so far, trough not much has already been explored.
Nice! The narrative is an interesting and action-packed one. The characters are well rounded. The grammar is on point too. Kudos to the author.
In most original system novels, you see authors ripping the concept off right from some Chinese original novel.
But not this one. As far as I have read, it is original. Even if it isn't, the author handles the situation and system very professionally.
Though I am afraid the novel might turn into another of those system protag where the mc is actually the sidekick.
But I digress, good novel
Intreaging idea but too generic, but you can fix that by making your novel like a movie if you can structure it in a way it would make it interesting and attractive you will make whatever your trying to make great if not better. (For example watch some movies about the subject your going for)
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After reading everything I would say that it isn't the worst thing I've ever read but not the greatest either. I say give it try and you may enjoy it and stay to read the rest.
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Author I still waiting for the good stuff to happen if you know what I mean.
Ok, so before you judge a book by it’s cover, by it’s title, or even by it’s synopsis, and before you think “Oh no, a CN novel set in Japan”, stop. I can guarantee you that it won’t be like that. The author didn’t just go full throttle nationalistic bs on this book, it’s not like you would find it saying “CHINA NUMBA WOONNN!!!” every few lines, not even every few chapters. In fact, although there is just a tad bit of nationalism sprinkled in there, it’s not over the top, at most it’ll just be “Japan is the safest” or something like that.
Not all stories are made by authors who are nationalistic and racist pieces of sh-, just keep that in mind. In fact, it seems like the author acually did his research before writing this novel. While reading this novel, you could also learn some fun and interesting facts I guess, for example, there was this japanese comedy series that spanned over decades long, totaling up to about 50 films each around 90 minutes long. It’s the national movie of Japan, even Detective Conan could not be compared to it or so the author says, it’s name is Otoko wa Tsurai yo(It’s tough being a man).
I recommend you to just give it a try first.
Writing needs an editor URGENTLY. I have nothing to say about the stability of releases, I started reading and the story already has more than 100 cap. Development is abrupt and without much explanation of why things happen. Character development, well, the characters are presented, their races are spoken but not described of their traits, they (including MC) only exist and act without explaining why or how they became so (everything will be explained later "and so the explanation is pushed with the belly "). The backgrounds of the worlds look good, but not many are explained (again).
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