This is an absolute hidden gem. Long chapters, interesting and (mostly) intelligent characters, few of the overused tropes and no need to rely on "reincarnation" or "time regression" to allow the protagonist to become progress.
The bad: time can flow in an inconsistent way in a few of the chapters, with little to help the reader to know how much time has passed. Honestly, that is my one gripe as this novel is bloody fantastic. Kudos to the author, I will take 1 well written super chapter per week over 6-8 poor quality mini chapters anytime.
Just a waste of my time
Bad... I cannot stress this anymore. it’s just bad. Translation isn’t that of amazing quality, at times you jjst don’t know what is going on in the least or why things happen as they do.Author just might have been very bad at math, maybe he skipped over something that explained why. Dunno.MC is very dumb, no development, no actual personality. Boring.Unexplained things happen for no particular reason.Story just feels super forced and uncontrolled. Amateurish.Nothing stands out.
Currently my best.... The translation is quite good... Ah like the storyline... MC is not always dumb and stupid... The characters are well made... No random killing off of characters!
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