dumbass villain
dumbass MC
dumbass cliche plot
dumbass Author
Anyways you'll frequently face palming while reading this novel
The story is progressing smoothly with character development. Also you should add more tags that correlate to the story like kingdom buildings, city building, etc.
Hi guys,I really appreciate the fantasy world the author has created...you really refine the finer details about the world you are talking about and it's pretty easily picturised in my mind...hope you keep us posted with more chapters...it's a good book to chill with..
I like the background setting for the protagonist but overall the story is great, would definitely recommend. The ingenuity that the author brings really packs a punch!
This story is awful. What's worse the tags are wrong.
The protagonist is a complete White-Knight (righteous hypocrite) character who 'righteously' expands his harem. How does he do this? Conveniently the MC will meet Heavenly Beauties, and soon after there'll be great opportunity for him to save them. They of course can't help but swoon - if they aren't falling for him fast enough, his cultivation technique will have him lose control, leading to him r@ping them. The victim becomes a tsundere and realises who her true love is - the MC...
If this wasn't enough, this novel has the annoying tendency to 'power-up' the entire harem every time the protagonist's power increases. Artefact (necklace) given to harem member 1 turns out to be a godly artefact and she suddenly becomes tyrannically powerful!
How a novel could go so wrong is beyond me. This is a shockingly poor novel.
Good Novel..............
Hello, lil kitty~! I rarely read and leave reviews because I too focused on my writing so much however, this day is different because I want to read what my friends are writing.
Here goes~!
First 2 chapters are up, and it is already interesting! Knowing that you are writing at a young age, this is already good~! I like your choice of words! The atmosphere of the setting is light hearted as it is fun! I know that this story will soon have a twist, ya know? I am going to expect more from you, lil kitty~! You made me smile!
Keep up the good work! I can really see potential~!
Muito bom, ansioso pelo futuro dessa novel, ate agora tem sido muito boa
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i think it is great so far keep up the work
Wow off the bat,i amell a plot, we already have a love intRest/childhood besTfriend basically trying to sell the MC to a a basic death areNa,a motHer who cares mOre about herself than her Own son(MC),and a naive MC who saCrifices himself. alright hopefully his head will clear up and he will get his revenge
Good story! Keep it up!
Synopsis is interesting and plot is well described.
You have a great imagination and your writing skill is also good. Like the story very much though I couldn't read all the chapters because of time but I will be back with more time. Until then, keep updating! Fighting!
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