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I only spend my day reading so I would love to see this ability in action -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Sad was not picked.. crazy picking system for novels.. it was really a great novel.lots of fun.. mc was not arrogant and has brains not like other op mc.. they should have picked this rather than those trash novels that were picked.. so annoying
ive read to chap 154
this is a sign in system story. meaning that the MC will focus more on cultivating that takes like decades before coming out to gain some insight before going into retreat again.
action do exist but is it's very little at the beginning. although at the later time, it does increases but it is still quite minimal.
MC is told to have great temperament. meaning that he wont panic or show great emotion when facing any situation. and yes, thats what how he acts at the story. he wont help anyone if it endangers himself or risky. he is not a good person nor a bad person. he is a lawful neutral person. only when it involved his master would he begin to show such emotion.
characters are great and theres a lot of untap potential for future plots. world background are not explained unless needed.
the romance is great though. this is still a xianxia novel but the romance is quite pure, unlike the usual xianxia where they meet, face some danger together, fall in love, and then become couple. they actually *spoiler* get engage before falling in love. and right now they dont like each other, but have a favourable impression towarss each other. and because it is such a pure interaction where they slowly get close together. i can only honestly say that you should read this for the romance.
the other aspects is fine and depending on preference, it can be good or bad.
so before you start reading, please know that :
1. MC is a lawful neutral and wont help unless he have a good reason
2. theres not much action as expected from a sign in system genre
3. romance is a slow growing type
It looks like author is new, so there are many mistakes.
The story feels monotonous, without any emotion.
Characters feel shallow.
World background is not detailed and is written in confusing manner.
And after mc appearance in story, other characters become weak and dumb. I will not spoil it, when you read it, you will understand after seeing so many prisoners.
Conclusion:- Below average
I usually do not write reviews but this book is the worst on video game genre I have ever read.This Author really sucks in telling stories.You do all the things that would prevent anyone from completing this ?Novel.
Fun take on zombies and an apocalypse. Love the game system aspect and the evolution aspect. The variety of people on both sides is awesome.
Author as long as you don't abandon this novel of yours I'll support your career here even if you only upload once a week I'll continue to support you.
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Hope this gets picked! Seems interesting and like a nice spin on sign in novels. Big plus is from the summary it looks like no racism, no giving the characters white names, and good vibes
writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐
some words are missing in most of the paragraphs but it's not a big problem.
story development ⭐⭐⭐⭐
4 stars because you failed to discribe some of the scenes which caused me to have a hard time imagining things but over all it's good
character design ⭐⭐⭐
all the characters are good except the female characters