realy awesome, i love the mc (little ugly)
.The Author is back with another work again! First of all, I would like to commend the interesting character introductions. It's impressive and easy to understand. The quality of the chapters does not disappoint but rather it will make you want to read more. Even though it has only 10 chapters, I can definitely say that this novel has potential. So what are you waiting for? Go and give it a try!
Hey everyone, Biako is here, owner of this work. I hope you all like what i have to offer, this is a story that i worked hard in, (you must forgive the grammar though) I am not an English speaker so there will be a lot of mistakes, however, not that jarring
Also, i would like you all to be patient with story, it grows a lot and has ****-ton of world-building that you will certainly be amazed at please read and enjoy the story, i will start updating 5 chapters/day :D but first enjoy the 20 chapter release.
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I would be more than glad to receive your help financially if you could, otherwise, the story remains free for everyone to read.
Honestly I liked the first few chapters. After that its just keeps going down until chapter 18 when it became unreadable. After that I was just skipping
You can see the author just wanted to get to thet point fast and he didn’t care about how it got there.
The first two time skips were mean less and that’s 5 years. Even if he wanted to be low-key since the whole city know he could talk and walk and train when he was 1 year old it was useless.
His father already know he was special since birth but didn’t do anything. And that’s just the tip of the iceberg.
And that’s just the story development. Mind the shallow mc ,the useless guards and the sloppy power system in the world.
Everything about it was just really sloppy and disappointing
this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh.
10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story.
im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash.
this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star.
so my rating is 2.7 stars.
The story is really emotional , I cried a lot in some chapters and laugh till the point of crying in some chapters ! I really enjoyed the story and was really happy about the ending as I was thinking it would end tragically !!
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I don't even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it's like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time.
Normally I'd do an in-depth review on why I don't like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory.
Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding)
Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I'll give you this)
Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve)
Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above)
World Background: 3/5 (Well, there's a world and it's not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.)
If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
It’s a really interesting story, I’m surprised that it doesn’t catch a lot of people’s attention..
The plot looks good too, and characters looks exciting too, keep writing , author
I liked the chapter its really good when he makes jokes its really funny and kinda futuristic i really like but i dont know why the 4rt chapter hasent came out yet
I love this book. Easily one of my favorites on the platform. However, for one reason or another, the author seems to keep disappearing. It's been ages since the book has been updated, and since I'm kinda broke right now and can't buy any coins (much less enough to fully catch up) I'm stuck at a gigantic cliffhanger. Antihero, if you see this, I hope you're alright. If it's something with your health, understandable. If you don't have time to write, that's fine. If you're just not interested in completing the story, I'm cool with that. Just let us know. I want to know how things will end, but I I'll never find that out I'd rather be told than waiting around like an idiot for something that will never come.
please continue this. don't stop at the middle.