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Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
This is a fantastic book. I'm really a fan of the idea of the plot. its been long since I've seen someone write this kind of novel and I really appreciate it. Thank you author, for this fantastic book.
Good concept but...drop after chapter 8I'm tired of MC who kills everyone who direspects him... scenario levels 0..And why a random chinese become a murderer cultivator.I prefere to see mc help step by step some "mc/heros" and create a team/sect with a lots people who owes him.
I have read this novel when its was in his starting chapter and the story and world development was very good but because of low chater update i drop this novel but now it has more than ? chapter so iam back.
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first review!!!still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!
I suddenly realised that I had yet to review this book. So… here goes nothing.Short review: It’s a really good read. The stats speak for themselves.Long review:Writing quality: Not the best there is. Honestly, it can even be quite confusing at first. But the rate at which the dear author improved is scary. The writing in the later chapters might even drag you into the world inside the book. That being said, it might not be the best in WN, but not that far from it.Update Stability: It’s as stable as stable could be. Expect at least one chapter everyday, or even some ‘accidental’ mass releases.Story development: It’s not the most unique of stories. But fret not. A story is not driven by its uniqueness. It’s driven by ‘questions’ and ‘answers’, at least to me. And the way dear author used these elements is fine enough to keep you intrigued, to turn those pages (or scroll that screen to be precise).Character design: Here again, the elements of ‘Questions’ and ‘Answers’ are used. The major characters have depth and an air of mystery. But keep reading, the air of mystery will subside but depth- will increase, slowly but surely.World background: It’s a typical Eastern fantasy setting. So those of you who are veterans (and I assume that most of you are) can easily get accustomed to the world.And finally… it’s YURIIIIIIII!!!!Give it a try and you won’t regret it. Thanks.
Another book I recommend. Has proper granmar and story is well written. Mc is not arrogant and is humbleRufufnr difhebdichebdifhehdhciic
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I dont normally review books. Im more of a nomad type of guy. Meaning read some books then continue on my way. But this book is way to good for me to not write a review for. Plainly put this book is just all types of awesome.
The story beats Progress at a good rate!The character development and world
building are leagues ahead of most other books on this platform! The slower bits of the story dont drag on! And A Really big compliment… THE MAIN CHARACTER ISNT STUPID!
And the biggest thing(for me) that I love is that the author will set up a plot point… and the ACTUALLY pay it off later in the book!
If this is the only review you read(which I know it wont be) Im telling you…. read this book. Its worth it!