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Its ok i like reading this kind of stuff but missing storyline, author forgets what happened from the previous chapter like skills and items he has. Its just annoying theres no continuity in the story it jump chapters wish the author could fix the missing storyline and rewrite whats needed to be rewritten.
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???The book looks decent and suit my taste. another system and reincarnation, nice nice!!! waiting for the author to post chapters. ?
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Terminei de ler O início parece literalmente TBATE Mas depois fica muito melhor e original e acontecendo coisas que eu não esperava, foi uma boa leitura Vale a pena ler
Hope this gets picked! I really enjoy transmigration plus system novels, especially since these kinda usually have little to no racism. Reminds me a bit of Way of the Devil
A fantastic piece of work from Author-san.
A marvelous concept storywise. Although the pacing seems to be quite slow compared to some other stories I've read so far, Author-san has done an amazing work using it to give the readers a detailed, in-depth look into the characters' interactions, relationships, and machinations of our seemingly impassive and calculative MC. The interactions between the characters also feel quite natural and realistic.
The only slight criticism I have is about the grammar. There's usually some misplacement of pronouns or other tidbits during most chapters, and some descriptions of the characters' interactions that just feel a bit wrong detracting from the story, but otherwise it's quite good.
I recommend using Grammarly if you don't already. It effectively and efficiently aids in helping fix grammar mistakes and also allows you to learn from them properly. It's also free which is always a plus.
Moreover, personally, I'm somewhat sad it doesn't seem to be a harem-type story so far but hey, that's just me. It would be quite interesting to possibly have a side-story or development where all the girlfriends that the MC has helped, remember him for it or whatnot. However, Author-san may possibly have some plans regarding this already.
That aside, I'm definitely enjoying the read so far. I can't wait to see how Author-san develops this since it has so much potential and they're absolutely smashing it so far. Keep up the good work Author-san, you have my support! [img=recommend]
This is the worst story ever.
He ends up in Africa, eats a fruit and immediatly turns into some godly being that is able to challenge mihawk. Made up powers that he instantly got without explanation occur multiple times.
Also you randomly mention a superpower after a few chapters without explanation.
Your story just makes absolutely no sense.
The pacing is all over the place.
Premise is nice. Quite similar to Great Doctor Ling Ran but the MC has been a doctor for 10 years, iirc, at this point.
The fact that he has been a doctor for so long has basically no effect on the whole story, other than times where he quotes his "immense medical experience" when he needs to think of an excuse when using the system.
Speaking of the system, it basically fades out into the background and becomes a glorified scanner and surgery streaming machine later into story. Even the streaming plot point is mostly to show the readers that the MC is, indeed, a master surgeon by making the stream viewers stare and awe at the MC's supreme godly skill.
Plot progression is basically non-existent. 500 chapters in and only now is the MC starting to move up into a bigger stage. There is too much filler chapters that has mostly no impact on the overall story.
The translation quality takes a dive around 300 chapters in. It starts to feel like its MTL as the pretty boy side character starts being referred to as a "she" and mob characters' titles start changing around all the time, becoming Director, CEO, President, Doctor, Teacher and such. At around page 500 it becomes basically unreadable.
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Unless he writes a normal novel without any magic or cultivation or high tech or evolution, he is going to blow himself up due to the pure amount of energy in his body