The Girl Who Fought | h.p |

Is there any mtl of this? :’&9:83!:’&:&,&;&:’;&;&:&;’:&;&;’:&:8&;!:&;&;’:&,&&:&:;&&:&:929:&!3!:&&;8,&;&:!!;!;&8:&:&:!:’!;&:&&;&;&;&;&&:!

I can't even get through the first free chapters since there are so many Grammer mistakes. I came to read what could have been a compelling story but I can't find it under all the problems covering the chapter. I have stuck through something similar to this to the 1000 chapter because they at least kept the mistakes to a point where you could understand the story with out trying to decipher it.

From the title MMORPG (massive multiplayer online role playing game) player use keyboard, i dont know why mc must martial genius, when the game will use finger. This novel maybe use setting VR(virtual reality)MMORPG, author must muddle headed when make title just like MMORPG legendary guardian, hahahaha

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The story contains extreme NTR but somehow the reasoning makes it barely acceptable . I gave 5 star as I can see that Author is trying to build proper relationships through character developments.

Found this on QQ. Enjoying it more there then here. I just like QQ more then here. Feels easier. As for the story itself, GOOD. This story is easiest A- story I have read. The more it builds, the larger the grade I will give it based on my own subjective opinion.