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I like the concept of this story it is far different from your others and it has a lot of potential, i love your characters and the plot, keep up the good work and good luck with the wpc.
It has a very game-like feel to it,
As sit and read this i can picture the opening sequence to a futuristic shooter.
You jump out of a shuttle, into a battlefield and slowly clear out the the hostiles and at the end you get graded on your mission and you use the money earned to uprgrade your gear.
To anyone that likes a rpg shooter, this is something that you will definetly enjoy exploring
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I started reading this book, 1. Had many chapters. An 2. Had decent reviews. Every review talked about how great this story is….an tbh it has some good qualities.But I just finished reading the first arc an I’m not sure this is for me. I’m finding it difficult to associate with the character, story moves kind of slow, seems to be lots of open ended ‘figure it out for yourself’ plot holes (that may or may not be answered.)Idk I want action, blood, killing, death and destruction. Not to read about a disabled crippled boy starting an art studio because he discovered he can get stronger by playing the game; only for his mommy to ban him because she treats him like a green house flower; even after he told her his findings….idk good story but man is it slow….I’ll try to force myself to push forward in the story…who knows maybe it’ll get better.
i haven't read the story, but you had me at cats. im giving full stars because i had the almost the exact same idea a year ago minus the elemental cats. i get to be lazy now and not write the story and read someone elses stuff.
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i just read the first chapter and though it's just a little, I do enjoy this. Update more!
#Harem.Excuse me..i just pass here to give review. Hope reader enjoy reading this novel. I have no interest read harem. How many words u want to post thisreview!!!
story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.
MC is too much of a sociopath. He kills people if things are invonvenient for him. I read around 180 chapter only to drop it after that. Mc's personality is not compatible with mine. He is the person who wouldn't care to kill millions of people only to make his goal easier by 5%. I read a lot of novels including Warlock of the Magus World but somehow the mc of this novel triggers me.
I really like the story and cant wait for author to update, still waiting for the ML. getting excited here. Hope to update sooner author.
I love Zi Hua ❤️
