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I’m not much of a system reader but this one is really good. I enjoy the plot and I’ll continue reading more when published. Could use some editing but overall good job man!
This novel is actually cool
Everything messed up at dwarf kingdom arc
After i read the 2 availble chapters, so far ... Am hooked , the style of writting and the way of handeling events is fabelous and the careful placed info dump about hidden entitties (the one who rules all, SO,..) makes the suspanse quality quite high if, there are alot of things to mention as well but need to be sure after more chapter come, and the review will be updated .
Am fan of this type of fics so am surely going to follow it up, also long story short...if this kind of quality is mentained the fiction will be easilly highly ranked with other leading works.
Thanks for the tease chapters, am waitting for more to come up and good luck.
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I'll just shamelessly leave a review and say that I love you all, I'd love for you guys to kindly help correct my mistakes or typos. And leave a comment for the Chapter or something or Drop a review.
Why is my name in another book hahahahahha what is going on
This novel is really mind blowing, it gives you the vibes of real dark fantasyEspecially when the main character is brutal and sadistic against his enemies, he has no mercy to those who miss with him.
Nice story development... storyline too.✌️ I think you forget about background settings. Anyway, nice to read. ?
My review as of right now. I am currently enjoying this story, as someone who is still making his way through the authors other work, I feel that this story has quite a few concurrent themes between that story and this one, that's not to say its bad, because regardless of a few overused cliches centered on the protagonists looks, they do not detract from the story in any way.I have noticed maybe one or two grammatical faults as or the latest chapter, but none that are immersion breaking as they are very minor. So far, the only part of the story that I'm not overly fond of, is the fact the the protagonists name changes to something that I feel doesn't really flow as well as his original name, which in the grand scheme of things is more of a personal gripe, than a fault with the story because the author explained the reason for the change and the lore behind the new name in a way that keeps it accurate withing the world itself. In conclusion, I'm very much enjoying my time with this story, it's characters are entertaining and it's world interesting.
i like the idea of this novel and specialy those acg characteres they are so cute unfortunately the personality of the mc is lame and really bad i don't know why but i feel disgusted and repulsed by how he acts in the end i couldn't continue reading it's such a shame though the world background and story developpment are good if only the mc was a little different
I genuinely enjoy storys where the mc has a daughter or child at all so I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to see where you take this and I'll be there all the way because its promising so far